Kazumi

This is. This is probably one of the most disturbing pieces I've read. I can feel that your English isn't very good, judging by your other stories, and sometimes you ...

Sick rhymes! Yaaaaaaaaayyyyyy awtbeyders here. Apologies if my review isn't as on point or thorough like my other reviews. Just woke up and I'm a bit hungry, but let's dissect ...

Yay, another flashfic! Two hundred and ninety-five words. Let's do this. Apologies if my review isn't very on-point. It's midnight, and I'm absolutely destroyed. I believe the best parts of ...

ey b0ss, it's awtbeyders juans again Sorry, but I'm just going to have to skip to the author's note. And sorry, once again, because I'll just say this now: What ...

ey b0ss, it's awtbeyders here Let's roast this. Oh no, it's a YA dystopian. One cringe point. Oh god, capitalizing certain nouns to make them sound important. Two cringe points. ...

I'm still waiting for those sick rhymes. Let's dissect. "Every day a little bit of me slips by, causing me deep pain" Is that little bit of you trying sneak ...

Ayyy, someone else who writes flashfics! The reason why I love flashfics is because it's like poetry: tells an elaborate and long story in just a few words, but in ...

Another long story. I feel too lazy to actually review long stories this, but I just gotta do it. For the newbies. Bear with me if my review's not on ...

Oh boy, this is some smart vocabulary. Let's dissect. 1st stanza "The laundry hums a circular refrain" One line in, and you're already at it with the audio-visual imagery. I ...

Oh boy. Another one of those one-line stanza freeverse poems. Please, don't use that kind of structure too much. It scatters relevant ideas and makes the poem harder to understand. ...

This poem. Rolls off my tongue. So nicely. So smoothly. This is gonna be a tricky dissection, since this one is really, really good. 1st Stanza: Smooth. Caramel to the ...

Disclaimer: Take everything I say with a grain of salt. It's your story, not mine. Why is it that mostly all of the freeverse poetry in this website comes in ...

I'm not very fond of poetry. Sometimes, I even despise it. Writers can just write whatever they want however they want it, and it still gets accepted and passed on ...

I like the theme you picked. I feel that writing this came naturally and easily to you, since this was something you wanted to write about, right? I can practically ...

I'm not very fond of poetry, but there are a few things that stand out for me in this one. First thing I noticed, your poem has a unique structure. ...