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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Growing Up

    Kazey here for a review! I really love this poem. I love the fact that it's an attempt at a rondeau, it's something I don't see very often at all, ...

    Jul 28, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: You Were A Winner To Me

    This actually brought tears to my eyes, because I've been through a similar situation, so thank you. This was stunning and heartfelt and heart-wrenching in all the right ways. I ...

    Jul 27, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Sleepless

    I'm thoroughly taken aback. Your description was so vivid and intriguing, and helped transport me to the scene I was reading about, made me feel all those emotions, and that, ...

    Jul 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: The Fall

    Wow! What an interesting piece. I was rather taken aback that you could bring such a strong idea into such a small piece of writing, so well done. There are, ...

    Jul 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: we share a lot of words

    Wow! I love this. It's a very abstract piece and I think that helps you to interpret it in your own special way. To me, this poem is about someone ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: there are no words

    This is a great poem. It seems very raw and emotional to me, speaks to you in a very personal way, and almost takes you back to way things used ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Rhyme Letter

    Wow! What a great yet simple poem! It gets your point across in a sufficient enough manner, and almost makes me feel guilty for writing the depressing poems I often ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Heavy Heart of a Friend

    This is a very poignant poem that I believe a lot of people could benefit from reading. I have been on both sides of this poem, and the feelings were ...

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Call Me Back (I'm So Lonely)

    I love this poem! It seems really personal and emotional. Your use of repetition ties the second stanza together and helps the entire poem to feel like it flows more, ...

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Still

    I love this poem! I think the first three stanzas flow beautifully and really convey the raw emotion your character is feeling. I especially love the lines; I still can’t ...

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Surrender

    Hi! Kazey here to leave a review! Wow! I really enjoyed this poem! I liked the structure a lot, and feel that you pulled off the rigid structure well. Often, ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Letter to the weather

    This poem was really nice! Well done! I loved your contrast of the literal rainy day with the metaphorical one. It conflicted nicely and helped to show a part of ...

    May 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Of Band-aids and bullet holes

    I loved this poem so much. It was beautiful! Your use of colloquialisms was great, it really brought the poem to life. Well done. I also loved the raw feelings ...

    May 19, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​Narcissus Poeticus

    I really loved this poem. It makes me very happy. I was first drawn by the title, as I love gardening. Your poem really encapsulates the beauty of nature and ...

    May 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Lather III: The Sink Will Remember This

    First, I would just like to say I really enjoyed your poem, so thank you. I really liked how the meaning of the poem, at first glance, isn't obvious. It ...

    May 18, 2015


Obsessing over what you regret won't get you anywhere.
— Steggy