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Re: Fairytale
Kazey here for a review! I loved Spilled so much I decided i absolutely had to check out your other work on Review Day. Needless to say, I love this. ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Warm Milk
Kazey here for a review! I found this poem quite haunting. You gave vivid yet simple descriptions of the most mundane of things, and I think that's what created this ...
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Re: What I Desire
Kazey here for a review! So the message you were sending in this poem was really strong. It was clear to your average reader, and I think for a worldwide ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: christmas lights
Kazey here for a review (Gotta get back in the lead!) So, I really liked the way that this poem is minimalistic, without capitalization or punctuation. I think it symbolised ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Road Trip
Your friendly neighbourhood Kazey here for a review! So, there really isn't much TO review to be fair, but it was really nice. I loved the repetition you used, as ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: 2 Your Demographic
Kazey here for a review! You put a really strong message across here, and I love that. You don't try to sugarcoat it behind flowery descriptions and nonsensical metaphor, and ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: construction workers hate their jobs though building blocks are great toys for your child
Kazey here for a review! This was an... interesting poem. I can't quite tell if I like it or not, although I think I do. The poem has a great ...
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Re: The Republic of Thieves
Kazey here for a review! This is a really nice piece, and looking at other comments I can see it's a memoir. Wow. You've been through some stuff. Anyway, I ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Life as I Live it [PART 1/2]
Kazey here for a review! Your description in this piece really fits it well. Being an autobiography, you don't use flowery language and adjectives, just real, true to life stuff, ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: What we could have been
Kazey here for a review! So, this was a very good start to a poem, especially for a genre you're not particularly familiar with. It's good to go out of ...
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Re: Bad Texter
Kazey here for my thoughts! The feels... They're too much. It was both really heart-breaking and yet heart-warming at the same time. I loved that even though the guy didn't ...
Jul 30, 2016 -
Re: murky depths, memories
Kazey here, again for my thoughts more than a review. So, I guess the idea is that two friends grew up together, but something awful happened and they grew apart? ...
Jul 29, 2016 -
Re: Money : A Mystery
Kazey here for a review! This was a really good poem, with a strong start and such potential. It's moral was very well-worded and you have such a rich vocabulary! ...
Jul 29, 2016 -
Re: Spilled
Kazey here, for my thoughts more than a review, but whatever. I loved how abstract this poem was, how you used strong imagery to, instead of paint a crisp, clear ...
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Re: Solanum toberosum
Kazey here for a review! Firstly, I love the title of your poem, how you've taken something as simple as a potato and made it seem so complex. Your imagery ...
Jul 28, 2016
