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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Fairytale

    Kazey here for a review! I loved Spilled so much I decided i absolutely had to check out your other work on Review Day. Needless to say, I love this. ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Warm Milk

    Kazey here for a review! I found this poem quite haunting. You gave vivid yet simple descriptions of the most mundane of things, and I think that's what created this ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What I Desire

    Kazey here for a review! So the message you were sending in this poem was really strong. It was clear to your average reader, and I think for a worldwide ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: christmas lights

    Kazey here for a review (Gotta get back in the lead!) So, I really liked the way that this poem is minimalistic, without capitalization or punctuation. I think it symbolised ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Road Trip

    Your friendly neighbourhood Kazey here for a review! So, there really isn't much TO review to be fair, but it was really nice. I loved the repetition you used, as ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: 2 Your Demographic

    Kazey here for a review! You put a really strong message across here, and I love that. You don't try to sugarcoat it behind flowery descriptions and nonsensical metaphor, and ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: construction workers hate their jobs though building blocks are great toys for your child

    Kazey here for a review! This was an... interesting poem. I can't quite tell if I like it or not, although I think I do. The poem has a great ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Republic of Thieves

    Kazey here for a review! This is a really nice piece, and looking at other comments I can see it's a memoir. Wow. You've been through some stuff. Anyway, I ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Life as I Live it [PART 1/2]

    Kazey here for a review! Your description in this piece really fits it well. Being an autobiography, you don't use flowery language and adjectives, just real, true to life stuff, ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: What we could have been

    Kazey here for a review! So, this was a very good start to a poem, especially for a genre you're not particularly familiar with. It's good to go out of ...

    Jul 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Bad Texter

    Kazey here for my thoughts! The feels... They're too much. It was both really heart-breaking and yet heart-warming at the same time. I loved that even though the guy didn't ...

    Jul 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: murky depths, memories

    Kazey here, again for my thoughts more than a review. So, I guess the idea is that two friends grew up together, but something awful happened and they grew apart? ...

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Money : A Mystery

    Kazey here for a review! This was a really good poem, with a strong start and such potential. It's moral was very well-worded and you have such a rich vocabulary! ...

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Spilled

    Kazey here, for my thoughts more than a review, but whatever. I loved how abstract this poem was, how you used strong imagery to, instead of paint a crisp, clear ...

    Jul 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Nature, Spiritual Re: Solanum toberosum

    Kazey here for a review! Firstly, I love the title of your poem, how you've taken something as simple as a potato and made it seem so complex. Your imagery ...

    Jul 28, 2016


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