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Re: Cheating
I hadn't heard Unfaitful before this, so I didn't know it sounded like it. Thanks for the help guys. I will work on fixing this.
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Just Like Last Time
Just a note: This actually did happen to me. Even the dialogue, from what I can remember, is word-for-word.The main character is me, just for your information. Just, as a ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: Death by Chess June 24, 2091 Part Three
Thanks, Ben! I am going to bring Reg into this shortly, and that is going to be interesting. This is when Riley was 15, and she hasn't been roughed out ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: Death by Chess June 23, 2091
About the name, if you keep reading, you will see why...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Sweet Blackberries
Fixed!
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)
This is 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 times better than the original!
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: My Heart
I really like this. I know exactly how you feel.
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: To Be A Rose
Thanks guys, I fixed the first line.
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Two Girls of Chicago
There is a second and third chapter already out, by the way.
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Two Girls of Chicago...{Chapter Two}
Neither, actually, Charolotte and Lillian are both going to have to WALK to nebraska
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Two Girls of Chicago
There is a chapter two..... look for it soon.
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: And Yet You Still Love Me.
Okay, I fixed the last part. Is it better now?
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: I Dreamt of you
This is so sad, but beautiful at the same time. I loved the beginning, it felt so happy. And then you go and do the depressing stuff and I am ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Seasonal Rebirth
Um, wow. That was absoulutly incredible. I would have had no idea you hadn't written poetry in a long time if you hadn't told us. This is simply incredible. BRAVA! ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Electric November
Sincce evryone above me has taken care of all the critique stuff I will just say that I love this. It is like my hamburgers: well done. (Get the joke?)
Jan 30, 2010