KatherineF92

hey everyone, thanks for the reviews! especially navita, i appreciate the honesty. and while i don't agree about it being melodramatic or pretentious, i do see where it does sound ...

thankyou guys for your critiques! they've helped me notice some odd quirks i need to fix

ooohh, i see! thanks for clearing that up!

thankyou ladyworkz! i'm glad you liked it; that was actually my goal, haha. i wrote it basically to describe the emotion of happiness in the hopes of spreading that warm ...

thanks guys! dasiamari: i apologize, because i like to write short and to the point poems sometimes, but if you didnt understand then i didn't write it correctly. i can ...

oh! p.s. i run track and xc too! woo!

thanks so much for your reviews! i agree there are parts to this that could use work, but i'm also going to have to say that the reason you don't ...

Thanks Rosie! I'll definatley keep your comments in mind while I work on this.

hey guys, thanks so much for reviewing this! im definatley taking all your suggestions into consideration and im working to make this less akward so you can enjoy it. :) ...

thank you all very much for your help, and i think i'll try to switch things around, just to see what happens. and also, thankyou suzanne for that example, it ...

sorry that got really messy although it looked alright when I wrote it up. strange..

haha wowwoww. Ok hi again, this is me fixing my critique. lol For the first quote, the to be is fine, just disregard what i said about it. Everything else ...