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Well, this was definately interesting! It was fast paced, with just enough information to keep me wanting to know more and left me wondering what it's all about. Very captivating! ...

There's nothing I can say to be helpful here, I just wanted to let you know that this is very impressive! It's really beautiful and also sad. I liked the ...

This was really sad and deep. The two people seem to have had a very complex relationship. The main thing that I noticed was that you repeat the word 'alone' ...

Well, I don't really have any helpful advice, just wanted to let you know that I really liked your piece! It has a nice flow to it, a little forlorn ...

I can't say much to help improve, I think it's awesome just how it is!! I'm glad that you put the intro line, so we know what's going on here. ...

Okay, so for me, I'm not into the whole drug and body usage thing. I find it offensive. But I'm not saying that to judge your work, just to let ...

I liekd it! It had a good flow and somewhat haunting feeling. The only things that distrupted the smooth feel was... She don't even care.' {/quote] It just seemed like ...

I really liked this poem, it had a lot of feeling to it! The only things that caught my attention were... You come back, you keep me always alone. Stuff ...

I liked the feeling to this piece, and how you put so many thoughts and description into a simple scene of sitting by the window, letting us know how you ...

Well, I liked it. It had an easy-going, mellow feel to it, but still interesting to read. I don't have much advice to give, though. The only thing I noticed ...

Can't offer much in terms of advice, but I just wanted to say that I really liked your work! In your shadow I hesitate. Your light is shining so brightly ...

Okay, so in the beginning you said... The teen followed Alexander... but then later... Yeesh, I’m twenty-one, now, not sixteen! Nothing too major, it just caught my attention. I didn't ...

Although I don't have any helpful comments to improve your piece, I just wanted to say that I liked it just the way it is! Not anymore. I wish your ...

Well, I'm not very experienced in poetry, so I don't think I can be much help feedback-wise, but I really liked your poem. I think it expresses what you were ...

Well, I read 'Broken' and just had to see the one before it. I really liked this one too! It has alot of emotion and I get to see the ...