Published June 10, 2011
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Honestly, I loved this. It's real and to the point. I liked when it said
Keep writing.Although I don't have any helpful comments to improve your piece, I just wanted to say that I liked it just the way it is!
I thought this line might be broken up into two lines, because it's two different sentences, but I don't know much about the structure of poetry, so maybe not. I think it works well either way!
<..> Kat
This is really good best I'v seen so far!
And thanks for the review I'll make sure to change the stuff u'd mentioned, keep on writting I'd love to see more of your work