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Re: Sweet Tears, and Chaos. Part 1 of Chapter 1.
I love it ^^ It's well write and the flow and pace are excelent ^^ and this part; So it's no surprise that I find it strange that he is ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Prologue
Oh my gosh you did it again ^^ I love the way you write about these dystopian societies ^^ I'm sorry if I seem creepy, reading all your stories but ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Something...?
Again, amazing ^^ I think I'm addicted to your writing style ^^ Are you a professional? Seriously. ^^ I mean, It's kinda really terrible what happens to her and all ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Prologue - Identity
This is amazing. ^^ You're really talented, you know that? ^^ I really can't see anything wrong with it. ^^ It looks completely professional ^^ This story really makes you ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Random piece of thought...
Oh my gosh. This is amazing!! ^u^ I love it!!! ^u^ I like the way you have the paragraphs short and easy to read. ^^ It's descriptive while not taking ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: lien
Wow. . .Just, wow. I totally loved this poem!! ^u^ It's so original, and you have such good imagery. . . This is amazing ^^ There are no mistakes that ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: A Thousand Demi-Gods~Chapter 4- History
The story is still good, but it still seems like you might be rushing a bit ^^ I can also tell you are typing fast ^^ While your first few ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: A Thousand Demi-Gods~ Chapter 3- The Ceremony
The story still seems good, but ok, this one is slightly confusing ^^'' not only because it's supposed to be in the beginning, I get that, but later on when ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: A Thousand Demi-Gods~Chapter 2- Fighting the Beast
Love it ^^ just one thing: you wrote "I hesitate before walking into the monstrous cage, It made my eyes grow wider and wider the closer I got to it." ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: A Thousand Demi-Gods~Chapter one- The fighters
I love this story so far ^^ I love Greek mythology and anything relating to it and I can't wait to read the other chapters ^^ My one piece of ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Mask
Oh my gosh I LOVE THIS POEM!! ^^ It reminds me of my own life that I call the Dark Days, and this is EXACTLY what I was thinking. But ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: The Nerd in the Back of the class
I love this!! ^^ It's ultra-unique. I've never read anything like it ^^ It's usually hard to write in free-style and have it sound good, but you do it and ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: 24 - chapter 1
See? Told you I'd keep reading ^^ Honestly, the story just keeps getting better ^^ And I really don't really see many mistakes ^^ Just again maybe with a few ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: 24 - prelude
Hey ^^ Thank you for looking at my story ^^ so when I saw one of yours, I decided to take a look at it ^^ Thank goodness I did! ...
Jun 23, 2012 -
Re: Kat in the Kold
Ok, I want to start off saying that this looks like A really good Idea ^^ And I like the name of the main character ^^ Now, I don't want ...
Jun 22, 2012
