KatGirl

Hello! Here to review again! The dialogue when she was speaking to Mr. Campbell (I think his name was) seemed very realistic, and he seemed sophisticated when he talked. There ...

Hello! The ending was quite a cliff-hanger. I'm sorry I haven't read your previous chapters, but I could get a basic understanding by reading this one. "But, shouldn't it of ...

Wow! This is really descriptive, showing instead of telling what is happening in the story {which most people do, including me} It was awfully hard to pick out anything wrong ...

Hello! I like how you describe things in your story with specific details, expressing emotions and gestures. It was actually quite difficult to find nitpicks! :) However, I noticed that ...

Interesting. It was very short but also was.. well, I really can't explain it.. just kind of.. science-y? Most people don't do poems like this, which is why it is ...

Wow. This expressed much emotion, even though it was a very short. The description could make you picture it clearly in their mind, yes I can literally see those books ...

OMG. I CAN'T EVEN. *cries because it's totally about cats. But wow. You could call her a crazy cat lady for sure. I'm assuming she made some cat out of ...

Woah! In-depth much? Amazing much? And of course, coyotes! This was in-depth and thorough, the introduction gave a clear summary of what the topic was about, and I really enjoy ...

This is my first time reviewing lyrics, but I'll try my best for sure. This song was totally pure, which I enjoyed, not all those songs about dumb girls saying ...

Don't feel discouraged! I actually didn't find any grammar mistakes but usually a lot of people on YWS are too lazy to read the entire thing, which in fact, I ...

Hello! I'd like to review your piece. I noticed several times that in dialogue you need a sentence but you forget/don't put one when it seems to need it. "Hey ...

long till I lose that. hi, my name is Road. Capitalization after a sentence is needed. I'm sure it was just a mistake. "Come on[,] just take your life[.] Its ...

Hi! I decided to review this because I felt like reviewing something... xD (The Olympians is a favorite!) "Uh, isn't Los Angeles already English?" Asked Will stupidly, smirk on his ...

Hello! I see that you have no paragraph breaks, which you must remember is a top priority. I would like to correct it for you just so that you can ...

Hello Bookwolf! I decided to read a couple [more] of your pieces and I thought I'd try to review one of them for once.. xD And she remembered what had ...