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Re: Game On Level 1.2
Hello, Niraco. Kanome here with a review for you. Well, it seems like I have to read from the way beginning to figure out what the story is about. But, ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Free
Hello, Brunnera. Kanome here with a review for you, as requested. Well, even though this is your first poem, I can honestly say that I love it. You made a ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: It Is Easier This Way
Hello, Roxie. Kanome here with a review for you. I really love the story line. I love the intensity and the narrative in the story. The main character had a ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: My Heart
Hello, Eferhilda. Kanome here with a review for you.. This makes me sad, because I felt this way a few times in my life.. So I guess the emotion in ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: it was a choice, and you will live with it tw: drugs
Hello, Silent. Kanome here with a review. Just a short one, I won't take long. I like the story plot, it's just there are many grammar errors in this piece... ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: deleted #1
Hello, Thewriter13. Kanome here with a review for you, as requested. Well, I really love the prologue. The prologue seemed interesting to me, so I think you should continue the ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: I waited for you
Hello, Eferhilda. Kanome here with a review for you. I like the repetitiveness in the poem. "I waited for you" That line works so well in this poem, I honestly ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Tell Me Something I DON'T Know
Hello, Defy. Kanome here with a review for you... Okay, first off, I really like this poem. It made me laugh the whole time I was reading it. So I ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: Awe
Hello, Kelpies. Kanome here with a review for you. Typical fan-girling going on here, at least, that's what I saw in the first sentence. Anywho, this is very interesting to ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: escapism
Hello. Okay, first of all, I really like the poem and choice of words, but it feels like it needs more, and it also needs to be edited (at least ...
Jun 5, 2014 -
Re: Dead (Climbing Rhyme)
Hello, Deanie. Kanome here with a wonderful review for you. Well, first off, I like this poem very much, but I feel like there are a few errors that need ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: The art of life
Hello, Laure. Kanome here with a wonderful review for you. First off, great imagery x3 I love the wording and the way the words turn into images in my head. ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: Only a Picture Reminds
Hello, Kanome here with a review for you. HONESTLY, I love the flow of words in this poem. It makes it clear to your readers, and to me (due to ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: I want to be punished no more, Daddy.
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. First off, this is really sad.. I felt the pain she had because I used to be in this situation before. This ...
Apr 15, 2014 -
Re: Dip, Dip, Potato Chip.
Kanome here with a wonderful review for you. First off, let me just say that this is the most interesting yet random poem I have ever read in my life. ...
Mar 4, 2014
