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Hey, Kanome here with another review. NITPICKS: Great news, I could not find any grammar errors, sentence errors, or punctuation errors. IMPROVEMENT: I believe you should try and attempt to ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. NITPICKS: My darling why do you cry? My darling why must you fill your eyes with tears? There needs to be commas ...

Hey, Kanome here with a review for you. I agree with @Catalyn. Your setting for the funeral was a bit vague but Claire's setting for her dreams are detailed. I ...

Hey there, Kanome here with a review. There are nitpicks here and there which I will point out but first, I want to say my opinion about this. The way ...

Hi there, Kanome here with a review. First, I like to say that I find this story interesting. I love how you portrayed your character and the way he is ...

Hello. Kanome with a review! First, my personal opinion... I did not expect this to be a very detailed perspective on illegal substances. (I don't know if I am allowed ...

Hello there, Kanome here with a review! Let's see, I really enjoyed the flow of the poem. It creates imagery for the readers and the flow of words makes the ...

Hello, Kanome here with a review for you c: You did say you were describing a character, I like it. I can see what your character looks like, because of ...

Hello, Kanome here with a review as requested. Well, the connection between the character and her friend seems very friendly and open-hearted. She relies on him no matter what the ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review. Woo... This is one of the longest chapters I ever read. xD Anywho, this read was simply worth it. I love the story plot, ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. This lead up to a very saddening conclusion. I thought it was going to have a happily ever after tale, but in ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review for you, as requested. I like this story because I am reading about a culture that I never learned before. It's interesting and new, ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review. I loved this chapter so far. It seems interesting yet comical. Although I am concerned about where you posted this... I think you meant ...

Hello, Holy. Kanome here with a review for you. I love the story so far, and yes, I read the first one before I came on this one c: The ...

Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. This story made me have a chill down my spine as I kept reading the well-descriptive scenario happening in this piece. This ...