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Re: Shuffling Off Our Mortal Coil
Hey there, Kanome here with a review in honor in Review Day. I don’t, I just, I thought this was going to end happily, but nooooo, I’m sad that he ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: General Behind Me #3 Her sister
Hello. Kanome here with a review in honor of Review Day and we are on the same review team. Go Team Red! Anyways, I don't see any errors that need ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Neil Dreams of the Sky
Hello. Kanome here with a review in honor of Review Day. I love the use of Armstrong's point of view. It brings the reader close to him of how he ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Journey to oasis #1 (ideas for first book title?)
Hello. Kanome here with a helpful review in honor of Review Day. Let's get started, shall we? NITPICKS: There were a few errors in your story that I will like ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Hikikomori
Hello. Kanome here with a helpful review in honor of Review Day. Let's get started, shall we? NITPICKS: laying on the floor emotions nonexistent door shut window too eyes glued ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Short cryptid story Loch Ness monster aka nessie
Hey there. Kanome here with a review in honor of Review Day. I have heard of Nessie, the "Loch Ness" monster in folklore and movies. I think the way you ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Cursed!! Chapter one.
Hi, LizEmo. Kanome here with a review in honor of Review Day. NITPICKS: The onlt thing that I can point out is the very first sentence: Jade Moved from one ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Following the stars - chapter 1
Hello, in honor of review day, I would love to leave a helpful review for you. NITPICKS: The only one I was able to find was this: “Of course she ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Saudade (prolog)
Hey there, Kanome here with a review. NITPICKS: I must ask, are you spelling Prologue as Prolog on purpose? If so, then that's amazing xD Anyways, the only things I ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Marcia and Me: Chapter One
Hi, Danni88 and @CarolineGlitter. Kanome here with a review. NITPICKS: The only thing I just want to nitpick is that the chapter was short. I wish there was more to ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Nicolette Chapter one
Hi, LizEmo. Kanome here with a review. NITPICKS: What is the name of the high school? Make sure you describe the setting and the name of the setting, it will ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: A message from space
Hey, there. Kanome with a review (or attempt with a review). First, I like to say, congrats for winning the Event 2 of the Winter Olympics. From what I can ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Preface- I have no idea for the title
Hi, sassybeatch15. Kanome here with a review. NITPICKS: There are no grammatical errors but the prologue since a little short... maybe because you are trying to build it up to ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Breakfast and Broken Memories
Hey there, Kanome here with a review. NITPICKS: I don't see any errors that I know of while I was reading this. So great job on that! IMPROVEMENT: No need ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Nicolette
Hey there. Kanome here with a review. NITPICKS: A girl with long blond hair, blue eyes, and a big tribal tattoo on her neck... You started describing your character off ...
Feb 22, 2018