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Re: Lavender
Hey, Lives4Christ24. Kanome here with an attempt of a review. Let's get started, shall we? First off, I love this haiku. Even though it's short, I can definitely see something ...
Mar 1, 2018 -
Re: Ace of Hearts [Chapter 1]
Hello. Kanome here with a review as promised. Let's get started, shall we? CHARACTERS: I personally liked all the characters. Especially the main character...her reaction is priceless. Then again, tha
Feb 28, 2018 -
Re: A tornado
Hey, Aadya. Kanome here with a review. Let's get started, shall we? NITPICKS: she said, "ur like a tornado" Change 'ur' to 'you're'. although i did understand what she meant, ...
Feb 27, 2018 -
Re: Last goodbye
Hey, CrystalRose. Kanome here with a review. Let's get started, shall we? NITPICKS: Your lips so soft and tasted like the rich golden honey that we would have,on toast or ...
Feb 27, 2018 -
Re: Love
Hey. Kanome here with a review. NITPICKS: war never ends pease never will begin Make sure you insert a comma between ends and peace . Also, you misspelled peace, be ...
Feb 27, 2018 -
Re: We all would be Atlas
Hello. Kanome here with a review! The word usage creates such a strong imagery for your readers, which is amazingly done well. The poem flows well, and it seems like ...
Feb 26, 2018 -
Re: Oh Mama
Hi, myjaspercat. I am here with a review for you in honor of Review Day. Hooray! Let's get this out of the Green Room, shall we? I like the way ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: [Review Contest] The Beauty of Writing Badly
Hi, BlueAfrica. Review time and take this out of the Green Room in honor of Review Day c: Once upon a time, I couldn't finish a draft. When I read ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Deleted 90
Hey, Kanome here with a review in honor of Review Day. Hooray! Let's get this out of the Green Room, shall we? First, I must ask, what kind of formatting ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: deleted
Hey there, Kanome here with a review in honor of Review Day. Let's get this out of the Green Room, shall we? First, I would like to say that my ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Argumentative Essay #2
Hey, Izanami! Kanome here with a review in honor of review day. I completely agree with you on this 100 percent! Without net neutrality, the economic balance will be all ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Ten 6-word short stories
Hey there. Kanome with a review in honor of Review Day (Also, to get this out of the Green Room for ya c: ) I understand that this was part ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: What We Know
Hey there. Kanome here with a review in honor of Review Day. This piece is deep and it shows a lot of intense emotions... I can't tell if it's just ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: The Hunted
Hey there, Kanome here with a review in honor in Review Day. This story is pretty interesting, and from the way it looks, I’m assuming that this is Tyler writing ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Puzzle pieces that do not fit
Hey there, Kanome here with a review in honor in Review Day. There are just a few grammatical errors on here that I would like to address: Happines to Happiness ...
Feb 25, 2018
