Kalliope

Hi Poetic Glow, this is a neat poem you have here. It didn't blow me off my feet, admittedly, but I thought it was nice. There are one or two ...

Hello guitargrl1323, you have a good start here. Relatable theme, no obvious mistakes, but I think you could work on this some more and it could be really good. Punctuation ...

Hi sheepy.shoo, first of all: Welcome to YWS. If you love writing and want to share your work with others you are at exactly the right place. There are a ...

Hello lordgluzman, I really like the flow you have to this song, it was easy to read wothout knowing the music. Also I like how "round" your song is in ...

Hello there, first of all I'd like to welcome you to this wonderful, wonderful site. I'm sure you'll love it and learn loads about writing. Considering your set of lyrics ...

Hey there, This was very short, yet quite neat. You managed to criticise a lot of the foolish things teenage girls tend to do and sounded very real. Down to ...

You know what I really can't believe? That you haven't been showered in praise for this by anyone yet! This is one of the most original and best songs I ...

Hello angel19, welcome to YWS! It's great that you like to write and are eager to share your work. Here on YWS there are a lot of very talented and ...

Okay I will just be a complete smart-ass in this post. You get to hit me for it, but ... it's really das Liederbuch. *hides* (I owe you ...?) I ...

Hi there! Um actually I was reminded of the song Up! by Shania Twain. The chorus and the title are somewhat similar, but onto this song. This is a good ...

Hey lyrical_sunshine, I've wanted to read some of your work for quite a bit and it was absolutely worth it. I absolutely loved this and don't really have any suggestions ...

Choco! Here's a crit for your song :) Hmmm, I liked your imagery when you wrote about standing on top of a building and all that. In this part here: ...

Goodness, I owe you, this took forever! First of all I must say that your writing is amazing and this was a very enjoyable read. Part One The ring felt ...

Hi there, welcome to YWS! I hope you have great fun here and get loads of good tips. Also as choco said reviewing is a good thing. It helps you ...

Hello elephantwalrus, I think you have quite lovely song here. I enjoyed your chorus a lot, just because it describes this kind of caught feeling when you know you're in ...