Very nice I really like those lyrics and I would love to hear it as a song. Hard to fault it as it seems very meaningful and highly interesting, very talented in my opinion well done.
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Well, I promised a fun song was coming next after I wrote "Fly", and I mostly kept my promise. Certainly no "Red High Heels", but the chorus is quick and cool. If only I could record this...
I think I've been too down lately,
Never saw the better side.
At any given time,
I could've broken down and cried.
But now I'm straying from that path,
And giving myself room to fly,
'Cause now it's time to break away,
Get up there and touch the sky.
'Cause I'm-
Only going up, up, up!
Only going up, up, up!
Only going up, up, up from here!
Every time I walk down the street,
You can see it in my eyes.
I'm won't look down, nothing but up,
And now I'm gonna win the prize.
You think you can keep me down,
Well, you're in for a big surprise.
I'll just tell you, stay where you are,
And don't fool me with some disguise,
'Cause-
I'm only going up, up, up!
Only going up, up, up!
Only going up, up, up from here!
Now I glide along,
Sometimes glancing down,
But no, I won't go there,
'Cause then I surely will be bound,
So now I'm only going up, up, up!
Only going up, up, up!
Only going up, up, up from here!
Yeah!
Only up!
Just up!
Very nice I really like those lyrics and I would love to hear it as a song. Hard to fault it as it seems very meaningful and highly interesting, very talented in my opinion well done.
wow, i've read all the lyrics to your songs... and now i really want to hear how they sound!!!! maybe someday when you're a famous song-writer. keep writing.
Hi there!
Um actually I was reminded of the song Up! by Shania Twain. The chorus and the title are somewhat similar, but onto this song.
This is a good energy song that basically makes you want to kick off and fly yourself, so it's good for a musical, because it conveys the energy well, so yay for that.
Chorus
Only going up, up, up!
Only going up, up, up!
Only going up, up, up from here!
I think I've been too down lately,
Never saw the better side.
At any given time,
I could've broken down and cried.
But now I'm straying from that path,
And giving myself room to fly,
'Cause now it's time to break away,
Get up there and touch the sky.
'Cause I'm-
Hmm... never heard a song that does this. I'll look up the Christina Agulara song, though.
Maybe I'll just replace the bridge with an instrumental break. That might be a good idea.
This is actually for the musical I'm starting to write. It's going to be the first and last song preformed.
This was cool. It's nice to see a light, happy sung here for one, because most aren't. Simple tune and I got it immediately. This song kind of reminded me of Keep On Singin' My Song by Christina Aguilera.
Only going up, up, up!
Only going up, up, up!
Only going up, up, up from here!
Now I glide along,
Sometimes glancing down,
But no, I won't go there,
'Cause then I surely will be bound,
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