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Hello there, this fine Review Day! I'm busy tackling various works without any reviews, and so there's a disproportionate amount of unreviewed later chapters of novels floating around, which is ...

Short as this is, I really, really think this piece would benefit from having paragraphs. It would make reading this much , much easier, and the more immediately accessible your ...

He bequeathed to you by deceleration of The Empire He bequeathed to you by the rapid slowing down of The Empire? Oh my. How does that even work? I think ...

This was short and sweet, and I liked it for that, however, there was one thing that really, really bugged me, and that was the inconsistency in your use of ...

Normally I'm pointing out people posting with text that is too small to comfortably read. In your case, the text is a bit too far on the large side of ...

Paragraphing is your best friend. At least, if you want people to read your stories. I can understand if the formatting got eaten while you were posting. It happens, and ...

Samuel Alexander richbach the third's Journal The inconsistent capitalization here does not inspire confidence in me as a reader. First impressions count, and right now, the first impression I'm getti

Hello there, this fine Review Day! I'm busy tackling various works without any reviews, and so there's a disproportionate amount of unreviewed later chapters of novels floating around, which is ...

First things first, this needs spacing out. As it is, all the paragraphs are mushed together into one giant mass of text which is very intimidating to your readers, especially ...

Hello there, this fine Review Day! I'm busy tackling various works without any reviews, and so there's a disproportionate amount of unreviewed later chapters of novels floating around, which is ...

This poem was very bland and repetitive. It also didn't make sense in one line, which, considering how short this piece was, really counts against it a lot. The line ...

Hello! Me again. And this time, I have a little bit of insight on the story, so yay? Remember what I said about merging the previous chapter with the next ...

This poem was very simple, and while I do like simple poems, this was simple to the point of being simplistic, which isn't good. Poetry, in order to really be ...

Hello there, this fine Review Day! I'm busy tackling various works without any reviews, and so there's a disproportionate amount of unreviewed later chapters of novels floating around, which is ...

This piece... confused me. A lot. Is this a blog? Because if it is, YWS has a separate section for blogs ( which you can find here ), and pretty ...