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Re: The Scars of Your Love (Ch. 1)
I would've used Twitter but right now it was too much of a concept for me to be able to grasp. It took me from 6th to 8th grade just ...
Jan 9, 2013 -
Re: This I believe-- Essay
Hello Sparky! I've had my eye on reviewing this for a while, though I'm just getting around to reviewing it now. >.> And the first thing I'm going to talk ...
Jan 9, 2013 -
Re: Remembering Dana
Hello Hymar. Since you've mentioned having issues with formatting, I'm not going to cover that except to suggest that you maybe try to format this again. Nate, the site owner, ...
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: The Saga Prolouge & Ch. 1
Hello there nate15596! I, Kyllorac, will be reviewing you today on this very fine Review Day. With that said, onto the review! Now, after having seen a lot of prose ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: The Border of Light 1 - Chapter Three (Old)
Hello there MaryEvans! I, Kyllorac, will be reviewing you today on this very fine Review Day. Before I do, though, you should know that I haven't read any of your ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Wolf, Year of the Dog- Chapter 1
Hello there whitewolfpuppy! I, Kyllorac, will be reviewing you today on this very fine Review Day. With that said, onto the review! The Prologue really doesn't do much for this ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: The Moon's Malevolence Chapter 1
Hello there omniyus! I, Kyllorac, will be reviewing you today on this very fine Review Day. Please ignore the no-paragraph thing. I am trying to fix it and trying to ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Underemployed Overstressed
Hello there BaByLa1989! I, Kyllorac, will be reviewing you today on this very fine Review Day. With that said, onto the review! Overall, this piece reads mechanically and more clinically ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Here I Sit and Hesitate
Hello there {USERNAME}! I, Kyllorac, writer of the notorious pee poem that reigned supreme upon the front page for days, will be reviewing you today on this very fine Review ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: A Sound of Thunder
Hello there AlfonzoFernandez! I, Kyllorac, will be reviewing you today on this very fine Review Day. With that said, onto the review! Continuations and conclusions to stories are really tricky ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Hollow Summer
Hello there ghostie! I, Kyllorac, will be reviewing you today on this very fine Review Day. With that said, onto the review! Whether it was true or not, she doesn't ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: This is War (rewrite)
Hello there DragonGirl11! I, Kyllorac, will be reviewing you today on this very fine Review Day. With that said, I read through these lyrics a couple of times, and I ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Deleted
Hello there naturesgirl! I, Kyllorac, will be reviewing you today on this very fine Review Day. With that said, onto the review! I had thought about reconnecting with Haiden after ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Sole Survivor
Hello there Oathkeeper93! I think I might have reviewed one of your other pieces already, but in case I haven't, I'll just let you know that I, Kyllorac (and formerly ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Winged Child
Hello there Milaita! I, Murtle, usually known as Kyllorac, will be reviewing you today, on this very fine Review Day. With that said, onto the review! I noticed you mentioned ...
Dec 30, 2012