Kakali

Hey Jcbuttertoast! I really enjoyed this piece of poetry. It gives off pleasant and happy vibes. And I can relate to it, really. I love to dream, and I when ...

Veni. You. Are. Amazing. I'm just going to say this now and get over it. I cried. Like a baby. This was so touching for me to read. The amount ...

Kakali here! And hooooo buddy did I ever have a fun time reading this! Action! Mystery! Emotion! You did a great job at holding my attention with these three elements ...

Hi Shinthroughthedark! I really enjoyed reading this piece! It didn't just hold my attention, it grabbed my thoughts and heart. This piece was really nice because its easily relatable to ...

Hello! First I would like to say that you have a very interesting plot going on here! I can see that you have plans for these children right away. I ...

Hey there Silverfin! I thought your piece here was really good! It was easy to read and held my attention pretty well. (Which is saying something.) I only had a ...

Hey there, I'm returning the favor! Actually right now I'm only doing the first half, but don't worry, I will do the rest later! (Although I don't know if I ...

Hey there Booklover33! I saw your post and just wanted to help out! First of all, this piece is really cute. I love romance stories, and I can tell you ...

I gasp from the unexpected shrike. I don't know what a shrike is! Shriek maybe? Heh heh, Meko, aka my little momma’s boy. Thats the second time you used "aka", ...

Hey iCarly!! I'm here like you asked! Good story, just a few things. Slowly, Altair approached his victim with ease. The crowd was cheering. Chanting… I don't think chanting should ...

I liked it, and it totally made sense. I love how in depth it was. Here are a few nitpicks. Desperate to please the Mirror You bury yourself under liquid ...

*Claps* beautiful! Just one thing: "And here I must stay" Darn, and here I thought I had the pattern figured out. I liked the pattern, which was what I was ...

Around 4, probably, running around my back yard doing the exact same thing we were doing now. Our families have always been close and see eachother often. Spell numbers out, ...

I liked it! I might read the rest of them if you put them up! Well my first thought was "There sure is a lot of dialouge." So just to ...

I never was a normal kid. You don't know how many times I've heard that sort of beggining. I tried to not let it show, but all my efforts were ...