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  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor Re: Bang it goes

    First of all, I would like to congratulate you on writing a really nice poem. The concept drew in me - hook, line sinker. I know you mentioned this one ...

    Dec 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Rabbit's Roar

    I daresay the roar of the rabbit is ravishing indeed. I fancy your poetry, young lad! I love the way you meshed in the ideas of the rabbit and his ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Mr. Oldman

    Boy, oh boy! I wanted to review this since a long few hours ago! Finally in front of my laptop and here I am! The old guy's image projects that ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Truth About Self Harm

    Wow. That's deep. Especially the part about the thighs. This poem gave me goosebumps. The image of a friend amongst friends appeared in my head Friends who judge the frantic ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Empty Chair

    Wow, just beautiful! Pure beauty. I love this poem. The feeling is very realistic. It reverberates with my heart. I can feel the feelings. The loss of a good friend, ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Time

    I feel this poem was short and sweet, a bit on the dark side, like bitter chocolate! Or coffee beans more like it! (That's not a bad thing, it's good, ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Pete's Feet

    This sounded so... ADORABLE! It's hilarious. Comedic tone! And colorful too! Twenty one pants, ahahahahaha. Aww, Pete, you sure gave the guy a treat! :D The last 4 lines are ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Ship and the Storm

    Wow...Amazing! I can feel the message in this poem. The captain standing tall and proud and then on a fateful day, he's again learning. Just wow! I especially loved the ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Droplet Of Love In His Blood

    Hi there. Ahem. This is my third review so I am really feeling honoured to review such a beautiful poem. It took me a while to get the imagery but ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Other » Other, Other Re: What to Do If Your Book Have Mispelled Words

    After reading this piece, I can truly say one thing: It's from the heart. It is true it's hard to write from the heart these days, especially with the grammar ...

    Nov 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Phantom Jungle Cat

    Hi there. I've never done any reviews before but here goes my first one. Now, I'm not a grammar nazi (yet - working on my grammar as well) and I ...

    Nov 22, 2015


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites