KailaMarie

Caitlyn was an only child, like me. i thot she had a buncha brothers? They probably couldn’t think for themselves now that their lord, master, and king had gone lol, ...

I picked at the sandwich in front of me, taking off the shriveled tomatoes and unnaturally orange cheese. lol, they must go to my school. (the french fries would literally ...

So did the narator wake up tangled with the other girl? like while they were sleeping they started to cuddle? or...? i think it would be a little better if ...

i read this for school too, in like 8th grade i think. (maybe 7th?) i loved the courtroom scene!!! i reread that part like 6 times (and i almost NEVER ...

i thought it was interesting and unpredictable. i really liked the uniqueness of it, and the ending was sad to me. i almost cried. i loved Owen, but for some ...

i loved twilight, and the whole series!!! lil dono, i think you need to give eclipse a chance. i liked it much better than New Moon. I think New Moon ...

i really liked this. It was really creative, and a cool perspective. Ever since the first ray of light that reflected off the water from the pond in which I ...

i thought this was a cool concept, and the incorrect paragraphs addd to the voice of the character. The only thing is that certain parts were a little repetitive or ...

football field--where the best of the catfights took place--, down the stairs i think you dont need the comma there, but im not good at the comma thing. lol. i ...

i think its a cute chapter. Yes, this boy belonged in the second grade haha, what boy doesnt? But one day he’ll, be wrinklier and wiser than I.” i dont ...

oooOOoooOOooohhh. that's intense. the guy in her dream she was talking to was Wiley, right? lol. “No,” I sobbed, my voice nearly out of order. “I couldn’t.” i liked this ...

this was good. i liked how she called her mom by her first name because it shows how informal their relationship is. to make the transition in the moving, maybe ...

i liked the prologue. it was different, and caught my attention. Jeff looked obviously, but he squirmed awkwardly. i don't really get what his reaction was. i just got a ...