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This chapter seemed a little odd to me. Maybe because it was too short, but it was cute for Mae's birthday.
I want to know what's going on with Mae's dreams, her mom, and the kids at school. And what happened to Wiley? Her was there for a second and now gone.
Sorry, if this didn't seem much of a review. But you really have me intrigued with this sorry. It's so captivating.
-Merry
i think its a cute chapter.
haha, what boy doesnt?
i dont think you need the comma after "he'll"
you might want to say something like, "I said incredulously"
or maybe "I said with an incredulous voice" or something else.