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Kaia

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  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Television | Strange Sights

    Hello! I'm here to leave a review. :) I really enjoyed reading this piece. Your descriptive details are spot on from this part- The ceiling fan spun slowly and steadily. ...

    Aug 1, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A King of Blood and Ash (Edited)

    So, ahem! I believe this is a little part of something else, possibly? Well, either way, I'm here to give you a review. So, despite the little snippet you shared ...

    Jul 30, 2023
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: red lipstick

    So first of all, nicely done with the rhyme scheme here. Whenever I try to make things rhyme, it doesn't usually work out all that great, but you nailed that ...

    Jul 26, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: I craved for a disaster

    Hello, Alpaca!! Saw this sitting all lonely in the Green Room and thought it was time I did another review after getting all lazy during my vacation. All right, let's ...

    Jul 24, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Repercussions: Part Six

    Hello! I'm currently on vacation which is why it's been a bit since I've reviewed. I actually read this a while ago, but didn't have the chance to review until ...

    Jul 18, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Other Re: Foxmaster- who is she really? intro

    Hello, foxmaster! I'm here to leave a review here. I have to say I was a little disappointed to find that this was so short. I was just getting interested, ...

    Jul 14, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: PftPP- Chapter 2.2

    Wowah! That was a lot of unforseen events right there! I was not expecting another character to show up for a while, but in rushes Damon's brother. And my are ...

    Jul 14, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: This Feeling So New

    Hey, Alpaca! Hm. You say you aren't on love with someone, but then...how does this seem so realistic, hm? *Taps chin with suspicion* All right, on to the review. Obviously, ...

    Jul 14, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: PftPP Chapter 2.1

    As always, the main character here never ceases to amuse me. He always brings a touch of humor into even the most serious scenes. For whatever reason he decides to ...

    Jul 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: You Were Once There - Chapter One

    Hello! I realized just now that you are a new member to YWS so welcome, welcome! I hope you have a great time here. All right. All that aside, it's ...

    Jul 11, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Piper

    Hello! As part of The After Watch I'm here to leave you a review. :) I really like this short piece. You're descriptions certainly opened my imagination here. :) I ...

    Jul 9, 2023
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Three days

    It’s been three days since I told you that you are not my family and are out of my life. Three days since I told you that you can die. ...

    Jul 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Archer's Paradox Chapter 5: Misfire

    Hello, VengefulReaper! I'm hear to leave a quick review, as I don't have much to nitpick on this chapter. *Grins* This chapter was incredibly intense! Starting with the creepy description ...

    Jul 8, 2023
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: 1st grade boy

    This was a really interesting piece. From the beginning I could see that this boy was going to be some one important to the main character. But I did think ...

    Jul 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Eight, pt 2

    Hello! I just jumped in at this part to give this piece a review. :) I like how you really built up an aura of sadness in the beginning. Obviously, ...

    Jul 7, 2023


“I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you.”
— Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince