Kaedee

Hello Naydy, welcome to YWS. I'm KD, and I'll be reviewing your story today. Here are my nitpicks for first third of your story. I was late for school. I ...

I'm sure your brother loved this! At least I did. Even though it is simple, I found this an entertaining read for everyone, not just for a younger audience. I ...

Hey, Kaedee here to review! Welcome to YWS. The title was interesting, different. It drew me into this prologue. The beginning is also great, because it also, well, draws the ...

Hey, Kaedee here again! Welcome to YWS. (I forgot to say that last time, not quite realizing you were a new member!) Okay. The beginning was pretty good! But mostly... ...

I love it. The style of this piece stands out. The short sentences and repetitiveness definitely has an effect, but be careful not to overuse it! Right now it's on ...

Kaedee here to review. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -I loved the voice for this piece, which keeps the reader interested. In my opinion, the voice is one ...

I loved it too. I admit though, I was drawn to the book for more of its cover (which has a giant rubber duck, if I remember correctly) than what ...

I love it! Throwing open the door to the McDonalds I paused and turned to the neon arches that led me to this oasis in the midst of concrete traffic ...

Hey, I'm Kaedee. I'll be your review today! The beginning of this chapter was funny, starting with Becca having a bloody nose since she banged it on a glass table ...

Wow. That's what I was just about to say! Very interesting story. Haha...and very funny! I loved the narrator's voice, which was amusing and entertaining. The thing is, the story ...

Hey Anonymous, welcome to YWS. I'm Kaedee, your reviewer today. Well done! Bravo! You did a magnificent job. *clicks 'Like' button* I hardly ever do that, which clearly shows my ...

Hey, Dasiamari, Kaedee is here to review...I was drawn by your title, which literally dragged me into your story. Good job with that! OK, I guess I will add some ...

Hey, Forest. Kaedee, here to review. I liked this. I enjoyed the narrator's voice. The only way to make this much better, is if you described surroundings more and the ...

Hey, I'm Kaedee, here to review today! This is so short! Put up more and you will get more critique ^^ Yes, I agree...you will be adding more to this, ...

Twilight was okay...but nothing great. Just a week ago I got myself to read it, since my friends kept on talking on and on about great it was, and what ...