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Re: You can’t help but fixate on shadows cast by the light
Hey, Kaerae here! I feel like I don't have much to critique on this one, but I will try my best! ~ (ps: I rather like your titles) THE NEVER-ENDING ...
Jun 2, 2024 -
Re: The Peacock's Sound
Hey! I know I am super late on this one~ But I was going through old pieces and when I was reading it, I thought I would drop a review ...
Jun 2, 2024 -
Re: Chapter One: Far from over
Hey, KaeRae here! First of all, this chapter was very well written. It is layered in suspense the whole time. The setting and main character's description is set up right ...
Jun 1, 2024 -
Re: opposites attract
Hey, KaeRae here! I liked the concept of this poem how only one person is in love with the other. I really don't think this is much of a review, ...
Jun 1, 2024 -
Re: Chapter 1: Imprisoned
Hey, KaeRae here! First of all, can I just say I love the way you organized everything. Its super pretty and professional~ Okay let's jump right into it. The setting ...
May 30, 2024 -
Re: Time heals (longer version)
Hey, Kaerae here again! Thought I would review the longer version since the first draft was amazing. First of all, I like the structure you added to this one. It ...
May 30, 2024 -
Re: Time heals.
Hey, KaeRae here! I feel like this isn't much of a review, but I'm here anyway. I genuinely can't find anything to critique on. I like the use of the ...
May 30, 2024 -
Re: The Monster
Hey, KaeRae here! Just wanted to review your story while I was reading it. First of all, I don't have a fear of chickens, but the way you described them ...
May 16, 2024 -
Re: The Day That Froze the Sun | Part One
Hey! Wanted to stop by and give some of my advice while I was reading. First of all, I absolutely love the title and the foreshadowing it brings. It definitely ...
May 3, 2024 -
Re: Love in decaying hearts: part nine
Hey! My name is Kaerae, I just stopped by to give a few suggestions while I was reading. First of all, I don't know the back story because I haven't ...
Apr 23, 2024 -
Re: Box Children - Chapter 1
Hey Toast! Just wanted to stop by and give my opinion while I was reading. First of all, I absolutely love the concept that you have based this nightmare off ...
Apr 23, 2024 -
Re: Libraries | Chapter 2 | Oh no.
Hey!!! My name is KaeRae, just wanted to give a few suggestions when I'm reading. It had big dark green letters standing tall on a one-story building. It read “dollar ...
Apr 23, 2024 -
Re: I Felt no pain.
Hey! My name is KaeRae, just thought I would give you a few suggestions while I was reading. The creature then slashed Emma, which led to her eye being popped ...
Apr 23, 2024 -
Re: skies are white. ch1
Hey!! My name is KaeRae! I loved the first part of this, just thought I would give some corrections while I'm reading... When I slid the door open to my ...
Apr 23, 2024