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KaBooomm

KaBooomm

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Door

    This was an interesting read! I liked how you tried to catch the readers' interest and had them hooked on till the end. I mean, I was pretty curious as ...

    Jul 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Twilight

    The first thing that popped up in my mind, when I saw the title, was 'Kataware doki'. It's from this movie I recently watched (Kimi no na wa, if you're ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: What Happened to the Dragons?

    I love how this story sounds so much lie a fairy-tale!! I can feel the magical vibes!! The atmosphere building is very good. I can actually picture the entire scene ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Irrelevant Exaggeration

    I like the concept behind this story. I love the first line, it immediately gives the reader an idea of what the story is about. I can see little aspects ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hellish Lullaby

    This is so nice!! I love the rhyming scheme of the poem, it flows so easily just like a lullaby. It reminds me of a poem I did in my ...

    Nov 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Insecurity and my thoughts

    Hi! I really like your poem! I love how simple and to the point it is. Also I like how you've mentioned that you feel insecure because you feel that ...

    Nov 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Murdered by perfection

    I really like this poem!! Especially the last line. Because how can the insane man be the only survivor left? I love how it makes me think that only the ...

    Jun 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Didn't Grow Wings

    I love how simple and to the point this poem is. This reminds of this quote: 'What if I fall? Oh, but my darling, What if you fly?' -e.h. It's ...

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Someone Else's Secret

    Wow! This is an amazing poem. I loved the imagery you used! The first stanza is absolutely beauiful!!! 'She invented here, as much as it invented her' This is my ...

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Restless: Chapter II

    I love this poem!! It's short but conveys an important message. I feel that many people can relate to it, as almost all of us hold untold stories inside ourselves. ...

    Apr 2, 2016


You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote