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KaBooomm

KaBooomm

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Door

    This was an interesting read! I liked how you tried to catch the readers' interest and had them hooked on till the end. I mean, I was pretty curious as ...

    Jul 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Twilight

    The first thing that popped up in my mind, when I saw the title, was 'Kataware doki'. It's from this movie I recently watched (Kimi no na wa, if you're ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: What Happened to the Dragons?

    I love how this story sounds so much lie a fairy-tale!! I can feel the magical vibes!! The atmosphere building is very good. I can actually picture the entire scene ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Irrelevant Exaggeration

    I like the concept behind this story. I love the first line, it immediately gives the reader an idea of what the story is about. I can see little aspects ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hellish Lullaby

    This is so nice!! I love the rhyming scheme of the poem, it flows so easily just like a lullaby. It reminds me of a poem I did in my ...

    Nov 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Insecurity and my thoughts

    Hi! I really like your poem! I love how simple and to the point it is. Also I like how you've mentioned that you feel insecure because you feel that ...

    Nov 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Murdered by perfection

    I really like this poem!! Especially the last line. Because how can the insane man be the only survivor left? I love how it makes me think that only the ...

    Jun 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Didn't Grow Wings

    I love how simple and to the point this poem is. This reminds of this quote: 'What if I fall? Oh, but my darling, What if you fly?' -e.h. It's ...

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Someone Else's Secret

    Wow! This is an amazing poem. I loved the imagery you used! The first stanza is absolutely beauiful!!! 'She invented here, as much as it invented her' This is my ...

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Restless: Chapter II

    I love this poem!! It's short but conveys an important message. I feel that many people can relate to it, as almost all of us hold untold stories inside ourselves. ...

    Apr 2, 2016


Of those who say nothing, few are silent.
— Thomas Neill