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Re: Door
This was an interesting read! I liked how you tried to catch the readers' interest and had them hooked on till the end. I mean, I was pretty curious as ...
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: Twilight
The first thing that popped up in my mind, when I saw the title, was 'Kataware doki'. It's from this movie I recently watched (Kimi no na wa, if you're ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: What Happened to the Dragons?
I love how this story sounds so much lie a fairy-tale!! I can feel the magical vibes!! The atmosphere building is very good. I can actually picture the entire scene ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Irrelevant Exaggeration
I like the concept behind this story. I love the first line, it immediately gives the reader an idea of what the story is about. I can see little aspects ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Hellish Lullaby
This is so nice!! I love the rhyming scheme of the poem, it flows so easily just like a lullaby. It reminds me of a poem I did in my ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: Insecurity and my thoughts
Hi! I really like your poem! I love how simple and to the point it is. Also I like how you've mentioned that you feel insecure because you feel that ...
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: Murdered by perfection
I really like this poem!! Especially the last line. Because how can the insane man be the only survivor left? I love how it makes me think that only the ...
Jun 14, 2016 -
Re: I Didn't Grow Wings
I love how simple and to the point this poem is. This reminds of this quote: 'What if I fall? Oh, but my darling, What if you fly?' -e.h. It's ...
Apr 2, 2016 -
Re: Someone Else's Secret
Wow! This is an amazing poem. I loved the imagery you used! The first stanza is absolutely beauiful!!! 'She invented here, as much as it invented her' This is my ...
Apr 2, 2016 -
Re: Restless: Chapter II
I love this poem!! It's short but conveys an important message. I feel that many people can relate to it, as almost all of us hold untold stories inside ourselves. ...
Apr 2, 2016
