K1553

Hey! K1553 Here with a review. I think you made the most out of this challenge. You were able to describe a character very well, even in few sentences, and ...

Hey! K1553 here with a review. I really love this poem. It was honest, and clear, and down-to-Earth. The way you put the words together can only be described as ...

Hi! K1553 here with a review. To be honest, I don't really have any criticism. Mostly I just want to point out what you did right, so you can do ...

Hi! K1553 here with a review. First of all, let me just say I really love this poem. Not only is it heartfelt, and shows exactly what you will miss ...

The first thing I noticed is your very well-balanced use of two metaphors. I like the way you started off with "my strings that tie my heart together / are ...

Hi! This is a really interesting piece. I like the way you were indirect ("all-time high"). The imagery was detailed and realistic. Also, the speaker sounds every so slightly distant ...

This is amazing! I definitely get the metaphor. I don't know much about coding, but I've done a few courses for school over the years, and the way you compared ...

I really enjoyed your description. Your use of metaphor is amazing. But, like Lumi, I think that I little more imagery could definitely give the poem more depth. Also, using ...

I think the most impactful part of this poem is the way you divided it (drowning, coping, resting, and healing). The order of those words tells a sort of story, ...