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I just want to start out by saying, What a COOL super power this guys has. He can actually walk on hair, and he can take out bad guys. It ...

I will start out by saying that I am surprised how similar India is to least to me, from what you have written. The political debate, the religious debate, the ...

There are only two or three lines in this entire poem that I would encourage you to re-write. I get the feeling that this is a very personal piece, so ...

Hi, it's me again. ^.^ Glad to see a new chapter up. Okay...funny question, but have you knitted before? I'm asking this because when knitting sometimes you make mistakes, like ...

Okay, First off, this is just amazing. Good poetic voice at work here. As just a personal piece it is splendid. ^.^ But it's a little unpolished. Kinda like a ...

Hi, Awesome story! Lovely choice of perspective. I really like the way you say what you say, and how you are putting the reader right in there, but there are ...

Beautiful piece here! I love the idea's and the imagery. Let me see if I can help the grammar a bit, BUT remember that poetry has no "set" rules. What ...

This is a very beautiful poem...although I'm not sure beauty is the right word...Bold, maybe...no....I don't know. The imagery is clear and beautiful. I couldn't think of better wording for ...

HI, First of all, Great writing! I love a poem that dances, that is what yours does. :) BUT I have a few nit picks. First one, You start with ...

Firstly Hello there, loved reading your story! Overall, you write very creatively. I like they way describe things and you flow of action is great, not choppy or jumpy. Your ...