Justlittleoleme

You know, I really get this. I had to think about that last line, it all came like concrete at my face, and it really hit me. Weird how another ...

Yeah, Ariel is a cold and crazy sort, still not sure what to do with this character. I'm thinking on making her the villain in a different story rather than ...

There you go, all fixed up. Thank you for the critique :D I'm never good at spotting flaws in my own stuff. >.< Sorry about the cliff hanger :P I ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you! :D Sorry about being cliche, I was writing from personal experiences. Some of my best memories are tied to nights outside roasting marshmallows on a fire. :)

Oh, wow...Haha ^^' I think I put a little bit more of my soul in this than I meant to. Your actually very close now that I look at it, ...

Sorry, I'm not good at transitions, and it's fast because I was trying to mimic how the brain works when you are panicking. He is running through the forest after ...

Hey Twit, Thanks for reviewing my story. I'll try to liven up the main character a bit but I actually didn't plan on doing that till later on. Trust me, ...

I am afraid that I have only a few tips on improving this poem. To start off I was simply blown away by the beauty of it. It was more ...

Hey there! Let start off by saying that I really enjoyed reading this BUT it could have been a lot better! The first thing you need to do is tackle ...

Wow! This is wild, gritty, and very very much alive. I loved the scene, it almost reminded me of something I had written years ago (only it was a dragon ...

If you review this I will review yours! Promise!!! :3

Very powerful use of alliteration and a very unique concept. I LOVED IT!!! I really wanted to take a branch and bash the glass away so that the character could ...

You've written a very interesting story so far. I have enjoyed the characters you have created and the world you have made is pretty cool if I do say so ...