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  • Poetry » General, General Re: ANNA

    Hello HazelShay! I'm JustOneMorePoem coming in for a quick review! First off, for your first poem, this is magnificent and brilliant! The way your words just flow naturally and the ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Come Back, Do...

    Howdy! I'm JOMP but you can just call me 'L'. So, to begin I just want to say that I completely adored your work and I feel you are a ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Tatterd Paper Feathers

    Hi! I'm JustOneMorePoem but you can just call me 'L'. For your poem, I have no words with the capability to describe what I feel. Your poem is describable only ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Chasimology (a slam poem)

    First off, I just want to say hi! I'm JustOneMorePoem! Ok, now that introductions are out the window, I want to focus on the beautiful art that is your poem. ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: The speech I never got to make

    Howdy! I'm JustOneMorePoem, but you're free to call me 'L'. I'll admit that after all you've said in this, I teared up a little. Not because it's sad, but because ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Twinkle Twinkle.

    Howdy! I'm JustOneMorePoem, but you're free to call me 'L' if you want. For your poem, I don't know why but I feel a twinge of empathy towards the meaning ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Tick for Yes, Cross for No

    Hi! I'm JustOneMorePoem but you can just call me Laura! When I read your poem, I find some part of me sympathizing and agreeing with every word, and every stanza ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: 12 Months Later

    Hi! I'm JustOneMorePoem and I'm glad to meet you! So, turning towards the poem, I'm really glad that I read this. It's just so heart-felt and emotional, like you're the ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: That Dude, That Dude

    Hi new friend! So, about your poem. I just want to tell you that I really find it amusing all over, and just love every part of it. I just ...

    Jan 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: The Dead Third Class That Never Existed According to Holographic Ladybug

    Well hi new friend! I just wanted to start this off saying that I'm literally just tickled at how amazingly funny I thought your poem was. I feel like it's ...

    Jan 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: The Things That Made Me

    I.....um, I just, really don't know whether to sound perky in my greeting, or something, because your poem hit me....hard.....right in the feels. So, I'll just say "Hi", and let ...

    Jan 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Frozen Moments

    Jan 7, 2016


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