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Re: ANNA
Hello HazelShay! I'm JustOneMorePoem coming in for a quick review! First off, for your first poem, this is magnificent and brilliant! The way your words just flow naturally and the ...
May 13, 2016 -
Re: Come Back, Do...
Howdy! I'm JOMP but you can just call me 'L'. So, to begin I just want to say that I completely adored your work and I feel you are a ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: Tatterd Paper Feathers
Hi! I'm JustOneMorePoem but you can just call me 'L'. For your poem, I have no words with the capability to describe what I feel. Your poem is describable only ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Chasimology (a slam poem)
First off, I just want to say hi! I'm JustOneMorePoem! Ok, now that introductions are out the window, I want to focus on the beautiful art that is your poem. ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: The speech I never got to make
Howdy! I'm JustOneMorePoem, but you're free to call me 'L'. I'll admit that after all you've said in this, I teared up a little. Not because it's sad, but because ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Twinkle Twinkle.
Howdy! I'm JustOneMorePoem, but you're free to call me 'L' if you want. For your poem, I don't know why but I feel a twinge of empathy towards the meaning ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Tick for Yes, Cross for No
Hi! I'm JustOneMorePoem but you can just call me Laura! When I read your poem, I find some part of me sympathizing and agreeing with every word, and every stanza ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: 12 Months Later
Hi! I'm JustOneMorePoem and I'm glad to meet you! So, turning towards the poem, I'm really glad that I read this. It's just so heart-felt and emotional, like you're the ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: That Dude, That Dude
Hi new friend! So, about your poem. I just want to tell you that I really find it amusing all over, and just love every part of it. I just ...
Jan 12, 2016 -
Re: The Dead Third Class That Never Existed According to Holographic Ladybug
Well hi new friend! I just wanted to start this off saying that I'm literally just tickled at how amazingly funny I thought your poem was. I feel like it's ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: The Things That Made Me
I.....um, I just, really don't know whether to sound perky in my greeting, or something, because your poem hit me....hard.....right in the feels. So, I'll just say "Hi", and let ...
Jan 7, 2016 - Re: Frozen Moments Jan 7, 2016
