JustMeBeingMe

Wow! Your prose is so poetic, it's intricate and elegant. Like watching a ballet. The characterisations are so original and you've anthropomorphised the sea + star. I think that's really ...

This is a thoughtful, pensive poem. It's about identity conflicts, and expploring oneself. Growing up. Maturing. I wrote this review with the SMILE method. structure: The poem is divided into ...

Hi hopless! I'm trying the SMILE method today, to review your interesting piece. Structure: I notice how every stanza has four lines and the second line is the longest for ...

Hey there! So, I just had to say, your poem hit hard. You did a good job of capturing everything a relationship is... and that sense of being left behind ...

Hey there! Your piece beautifully captures the intricate feeling of being overlooked even when loved—a theme that really hits home. The way you repeat “But she didn’t doubt their love” ...

Hi, it's Just me being me here with a review. I'm not the most polished at reviews so maybe don't get too insulted if it comes out harsh, okay? Firstly, ...

Hi! I know reveiw day's over but because of time zones I couldn't write any reiews then, so here I am now, reviewing your beautiful poem. First, the format: It's ...

Hey there! I just finished reading your story, and there are some fantastic elements in it that really grabbed my attention. First off, your characters are relatable and well-drawn, particularly ...

Hey! I found this work in the green room and I thought that such a great story deserves a review. This fun and moody story gives a new take on ...

What a sad story! I'm so sorry for what you and your family must be going through. It's hard to believe that the world and technology have come so far, ...

Hey everyone, I just finished reading “Past-Birthday Maze,” and boy, what a wild ride it was! This story really took me on a rollercoaster of emotions. I mean, where do ...

Hi, I really enjoyed reading your poem - I'll never think of dandelions the same again! I like how you personified the dandelion and wind each as a female "her"! ...

Nice! I'm new here - this is literally the second work I'm seeing - so excuse my sloppy reviewing skills, please. What I liked: "If I knew more, maybe it’d ...