JustMeBeingMe

Hey hey! Welcome to YWS and thanks for posting this emotionally raw and honest poem. What I loved: the journey from childhood admiration to disappointment and emotional distance is well ...

Hey there, JMBM back with a mini-review. So, your poem, the way I understand it, is about your desire for pregnancy with the accompanying fear that surfaces on that last ...

Hi, JMBM here, hiding under my blanket and reading your story. I never try to review an entire piece at once cuz that's scary; I'll always feel like I missed ...

Afternoon! JMBM here with a mini review. First impressions. Cool format! On the first read, seeing that 'RED' interrupt the first stanza was hyper effective because it wasn't immediately obvious ...

Hi, Mini Review on this lovely sunday morning! I'm using Cherie's fruit-themed template today. Skin - Initial Observations The title. It was intriguing. Once I'd read the work I saw ...

Best parts: "The street lights you used to follow home are broken / And now we stumble through the darkness" - This is beautifully concrete imagery that carries the weight ...

Wow, that's really hard, I sympathise. Just know that seriously every day you get up and go out there into the big wide world without assassinating anyone? You're doing more ...

Omg your title is insane! I love that line. It's so powerful. ok mini review today! One thing I loved: the italicized part. 'You're a special flavour of undoing', that's ...

Okay so I just read through your draft and honestly? It's pretty cool. Like the whole waking-up-and-not-being-able-to-see-yourself thing is genuinely creepy and I was immediately hooked. That's a soli

Really enjoyed this one! The opening immediately grabbed me - there's something about the casual way you mention almost getting hit by a truck that feels very real and modern. ...

Mini review here on this lovely summer morning! Which, by the way, I know we all love YWS but- as this poem is telling us - maybe it's time to ...

Hi! You're my second mini-review of the day, so again, mini reviews do NOT list everything that's good about your poem, and this is not all the attention your striking ...

Hi, I'm here for a mini-review. Just a heads-up, my mini-reviews definitely do not list all the things I liked about a poem, just what struck me most on first ...

You referencing Edgar Allen Poe's 'The raven'? ('Nevermore') I love that poem! Now onto the mini - review. What I loved: This. it's laughable you're happy are you happy because ...

Your poem is short but sharp. I like how you opened with the sensory details of touch and taste as opposed to the more conventional sight. It brings us right ...