JustDance

Hi Loverr, JD here! It's been awhile since I've reviewed anything so this might be a bit rough, but hopefully I can help a bit! First off, it's very short. ...

Hey there! I actually liked this, I found it both amusing and strange. I agree that the foul language seems to just be shoved in there, but in a way ...

Hi there Sakshi! This is going to be a quick review, just placing emphasis on some factors you need to work on. First off, make sure you use proper punctuation ...

This could use improvement. The cliche dialogue left me feeling unsatisfied with this piece. Moreover, I understand how you're trying to base your story around the song ( I love ...

This was really fast-paced, which I both liked and disliked. I wish to have gotten to know the main character a bit more. Questions like - where is her mother? ...

I actually really enjoyed this. I personally find perfect, cheesy love stories annoying. But this one had a better taste to it, it wasn't perfect, and it wasn't exactly romantic. ...

Not a sin not a curse from what I can see, for those who fall in love easy. It happens so quickly like the blink of an eye but when ...

I agree with Tenyo 100% from what I can tell, the original was much better. Taking this as one of those topics where everyone has to shove their opinion in, ...

[Dr. Nutty] Welcome, Welcome, Hope you have had a good day. How may I help you? The second welcome and Hope should be completley lower case. (Takes out a pen ...

Hi there Howler, This was truly a very impressing poem, in my opinion. The topic? Unique. The writing? Good. The message? Fantastic. The last two lines were most definitely my ...

Hi there. Let's get started. I have to correct them in every morning class In every morning class? I believe the proper structure of that sentence should be, "Every morning ...

Hey there Singing! I'm JustDance, call me JD. I'm here to review this piece of yours! Hope I help! :) But pretending it never happened Comma! You feel lost without ...

But Holt glares at me and pulls me along the path through the woods. For some reason I am not very comfortable with the way you described how Holt looked ...

feathered fingers coax the night into open hands shaggy jaws of ebony close around it I think of this as the sky being coaxed into someone's hand, but then suddenly ...

Concentrate & relax Do not use "&". It's not the proper way to write, say "and". comeing This needs to be changed, you spelled it wrong. The correct word is: ...