This excerpt was written by my gf! I told her she couldn't & I believe she did it! What do you guys think?
Concentrate & relax. Those words were whispering in my mind. Mallor quickly moved his hands over the loom. He paused and wiped sweat from his brow and moved his string black hair out of his face.
"Only five more and I can go." he muttered. Mallor took a deep breath and started again. Pale dainty hands moved fast, strings of lights comeing forth and positioning themselves on the loom. They blazed brightly, erratic in their loom movements "Be still!" he yelled. The light stream ceased and dimmed a bit. Ah, he forget must be gentle to the light or they would disappear. He closed his eyes and bought his hands over his head; chanting:
Moonlight; Sunlight; bring it forth with all your might!
A sun shaped gem shone and shook and the light streams blazed brighter than ever! "Yes!" Mallor exclaimed. The light shaped itself into five beautiful woven bracelets. Satisfied Mallor gathered them and hid them in his cloak and rushed out of his work room.
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