JustALittleBarry

I have no words. This is beautiful.

Thank you for all the suggestions, I found them extremely helpful and plan on editing this poem! I really appreciate all of your thoughts and ideas. Have a great day!

Thanks for the review! I'm sorry to hear that you can relate to some of the negative things, and I hope you and able to overcome everything. I will add ...

Thank you!! :)

Sorry for the late reply, I didn't see your comment before. Thank you so, so much!! :D It made my day

Heard you were planning on writing a sonnet, this is great!

I haven't checked your portfolio for any new stories in a while, and I can't believe I didn't see this! A story by the magnificent Sky! I love it!

Lilacs are so pretty, and I think you gave them a new, magnificent meaning! Beautiful poem, keep up the good work and have a wonderful day!! :D

This was a nice poem with an interesting plot twist!

Thank you :)

I really like this poem (aka, I'm in love with it), and I can relate to it. Also, welcome to YWS!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!! :)

Thank you!!

Thank you so much!!

Yes! I get you! Also, now I have "Doubt" stuck in my head from your reference XD