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Jurelixranoanad

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: .

    So sorry, after I put the review up I went and did a bit of looking and I found that clone slang somewhere on wookiepedia. On of my best friends ...

    Jun 9, 2017
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: "Seduction"

    Thank you for the feedback. I placed the sentence about who Kylo was because I didn't know if my readers would know who I was talking about the stormtrooper going ...

    Jun 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: I don't know a good title.

    Thanks for the positive review%uD83D%uDE00

    May 31, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I was young and dumb

    It is a letter that the young girl wrote to the friend she killed.

    May 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: PAIN

    Hi,J here for a review. Thank you for sharing that amazing poem with us. There were a couple places that you broke the rhyme a little bit but it's not ...

    May 27, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blackout Poem number 2

    Sorry I really should have proofed this before I put it up, you can barely understand it.

    May 26, 2017
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: Open Letter to Mom pt 2 (formerly Mother's day)

    It's understandable. If you ever need to get anything off your chest that you don't want to put out in the open, please feel free to PM me.

    May 26, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: Be You

    Thank You!!

    May 25, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: Be You

    I'm only 13 so the doctors are hoping it will go away as I get older. Stay healthy! I hope your back will not cause you to much pain today.

    May 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: A Year Out Of Town chapter 2

    Thank you so much for that positive review. I will read this piece out loud as soon as I can. I can't wait to grow my Buffy character, I'm seriously ...

    May 22, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Darkness Becomes Me

    *CRINGES* Hi, J here for a review. Well I'm officially creeped out. I love that story it was creepy and dark and suspenceful. Granted there is some editing to be ...

    May 10, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Darkness Becomes Me

    *CRINGES* Hi, J here for a review. Well I'm officially creeped out. I love that story it was creepy and dark and suspenceful. Granted there is some editing to be ...

    May 10, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I was young and dumb

    I intended the spelling issues, rushing, and the shortness. I wanted it to seem like the boy was writing his dead friend a poem and they were both very young ...

    May 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Immortal Lady

    Hi, J here for a review. Good poem over all. Good job using the rules of grammar by capitalizing each line it doesn't add or take away from the poem ...

    May 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: From the Shadows

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    Hi, J here for a review. I like this poem and I'm not sure you meant to do this but it feels like you were writing directly to a wide ...

    May 5, 2017


The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians