Jurelixranoanad

Hi, J here for a review. I like this plot and hope you make more chapters. There are things that needs to be added and there are things that need ...

Hi, J here for a review. Good poem over all. Good job using the rules of grammar by capitalizing each line it doesn't add or take away from the poem ...

Hi, J here for a review. I like this poem and I'm not sure you meant to do this but it feels like you were writing directly to a wide ...

Hi, J here for a review. I like this poem because Mahala is such inspiring young woman and you really capture that in a short poem. Good job keeping the ...

Great emotional impact in the first few paragraphs with Felix dealing with his grief and the new demands as a king to be, however you were a bit repeditive in ...

Hi, J here for a review. Wow PLOT TWIST, there was a small one when we found out Drewford was a ghost too but then it was son sad when ...

Hi, J here for a review. I read your first chapter and absolutely loved it! You have a talent for this genre of writing. However, I did see some things ...

Hi J her for a reveiw. First things first I'm loving the story. Nice plot, interesting characters, and a fantasy video game world this has all the right elements to ...

Hi J, here for a review. As soon as I read the first line I immediately though "Oh crap this is gonna be another missing my ex poem" ,but you ...

Hi, J here for a review. As a older sister of a brat who thinks she knows everything, I can relate to this story. My parents always play favorites and ...

Wow! J here for a review. I found this story sad, true, and touching. We never know why certain people do certain things but they do and this story captures ...

Hi, J here for a review. First of all I really like the plot for this story and you were very good at keeping up with the plot as the ...

Hi, As a depression sufferer I can say this poem is very true and very touching. The descriptive words you used really captured what needed to be said. I could ...

How dare you make me cry! I like poetry that talks similarities, togetherness, and family, so this was just my cup of tea. I was not expecting that twist at ...

So far loving the story. If there was one thing I could tell you is the opening paragraph is a little so-so and since the characters seem a little strange ...