Juniper

Hey there Broken Vain! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you. Welcome to YWS, too. You joined an awesome place. Now for your poem here; If ...

Wow! This is great! I really liked it! Snoink has gone over everything thoroughly, so there is not much to touch on here. Very rarely do I come across a ...

Hey there Pen! June here! Suzanne just pointed out what I was going to say. Gah, she took the words out of my mouth. Or fingers. Made of paper, mud, ...

Hey there Archer! June here! For a first song, you did a great job. The lines in the first verse seem a little long. I don't suppose that would be ...

Hey Undulant! June here! Before I review this, I just want to let you know that we have a 2:1 policy here which means that for every one piece of ...

Hey there! I'm June and I'm going to review this for you. Welcome to YWS, Raymond. We have a 2:1 policy here which means that for every one piece of ...

Hey there! June here!! Okay, before we begin, I have a slight issue with your punctuation. It should follow at the end of the lines like this: , ; , ...

Hey Foxfire! June here! Your concept here is good; however there are a few issues with the way it's written. I'm not going to touch on all of them; I'll ...

Fabulous! Hey there, June here. It's been a good long time since I have seen anything like this. You did great. This is great; However, this is more lyric poetry ...

Heyyyy there Moonlight! June here! June is vicious, just so you know. Please don't take her bluntness too personal, she just goes a bit overboard sometimes without noticing; so don't ...

Hey there again Shina! Vicious June here again! To tear this apart. Okay! So, remember what I said before about repetition? Repetition is icky. It's gross. Just yuck. To speak, ...

Hey Symph! June here again to tear up another piece of work. I'm vicious. You've got a great rhythm going here; I love it. I can totally see this recited ...

Hey TN! This is great! There are things here that anyone could choose to nitpick. I find that unnecessary; it's written in essay form, and that's what makes it a ...

Hey there W1ldf1r3! June here! Such an exciting story you have going on here. I love it! I'm intrigued and I can't wait to read more! A few nitpicks: “No, ...

Hey there Anti! June here! This is great! I thought I had reviewed this already, but I haven't, so here we go. The whole reading-down thing gives a very dramatic ...