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Re: .
Hey there Rosey! June here! I'm going to run over this for you, and try to be as harsh as possible, mwahaha. :twisted:. Now, let's get to work... not that ...
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Re: Aphrodite De Melos
Hey there! June here :). I often tell myself to review your stuff. I go to your profile, read it, and walk away from it half annoyed that you just ...
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Re: Cotton Yarn Friendship
Hey there Yoha! Ahoy... whatever :P. June here! I'm going to run over this for you even though there isn't much at all to say about this! This is one ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: About Abortion
Hey there Lexi! I'm June, and I am going to briefly review this for you :). Before I begin, I want to point out that YWS has a rule :). ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Bad Boy
Hey there, Shina! June again :). Everyone has gotten to this before me! They've touched on everything that could be fixed. There isn't much to say about this, really! I ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Lavender Eyes
Hey there Shina, dear! June here! I know, I know, I haven't had the time to review anything by you, and I'm terribly sorry! I didn't want to rush and ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: um ... Just don't smear me Ok?
Hey there! I'm June! Welcome to YWS! I'm more than glad to meet and review this for you! :D Let's get to work. Before I begin with the slaughtering of ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: perceptional poetry 2
Hey there Evanrith! June here (I have finally gotten around to this. :twisted: ) So! Like I said to you before, there is nothing left for anybody to pick on/change/speak ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: The Letter
Hey there Dusty! I'm June, and I'm going to be your critic/instructor for the moment. I love the way you open your poem. A simple note; Dignity, fate, hope. I ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Close Your Eyes and Brace Yourself: Here's Your Last Mistake
Hey there Telina! June here! Your username is so pretty! It sounds elegant :). Okay, I really liked this. It made me think. Almost every line in this poem is ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Skating Through History
Hey there Elements; June here! Because I reviewed your friends' piece, I wanted to review something of yours! I have absolutely no nitpicks or criticism for this piece. It was ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Nostalgia
Hey all, This is my friends story. I told her how great the site is, and she wanted to see herself. She is signing up soon, but i decided to ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: I Will Not Run
Hey there PG! June here! There's something about your poems that I absolutely love. I'm not sure what it is; but, everything I've read by you is just amazing. This ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Stand Still
Hey there Myrcei! I'm June! Welcome to YWS and nice to meet you! You have such a cool username =). Now, onto the review! This is beautiful. I mean, extremely ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: 16th Street
Hey there Kylan! I never review anything of yours for various reasons. The main reason being that it's too good to receive reviews. Anyway, I love the way this is ...
Jan 28, 2009
