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Juniper

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Salted Rain

    Hi Happy-dear! June here! I haven't reviewed anything by you in ages! Anywhoo, here we go: • Okay! In your first stanza, the only thing that needs changing/fixing is your ...

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: A Hundred Suns: Etherite

    Hey Stori/FOD! June here! Okay! I really, really like A Hundred Suns: Sepia, so, I figured I would probably enjoy the other parts. I enjoyed most of them, but this? ...

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: .....Forget me not

    Hey there Sincerely, June here, and I am going to review this for you! I'll try not to be too harsh on you dear, here we go :D. I can't ...

    Feb 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Wolves (Love in the Sky)

    Hey there Zalarus! June here! There's not much to say about this piece other than how good it was. I really enjoyed it from start to finish. Compared to the ...

    Feb 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pathless

    Hey there Meow! Welcome to YWS *late*! I'm June and I am going to review this for you. Before I begin, I want to mention that it's better to post ...

    Feb 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Where is my radiant sun?

    Hi there Velvet Night! Nice to meet you-- welcome to YWS! I'm June, your critic for the moment, and I am going to run over this for you :D. Also! ...

    Feb 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You vs. Me

    Hey there Quiet Loud! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you (By the way, cool oxymoron of a username you have there :P) Let's get to business ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My day

    Hi there drama queen! I'm June! [I'm pretty sure we've met before, right? :)] Eek! I understand you're semi-new-ish, but our 2:1 policy must not be forgotten, dear. :) Please ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted poem

    Hey there Zakku Alpha! I'm June and I am going to review this for you :). (And, by the way, welcome to YWS! Hooray for new members!) So! Your concept ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Violence

    Hey Brina! I'm June :) This is a good foundation for an essay. It's serious and straight to the point. There are a few things in this that need some ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Quenched

    Hi there Hannah! It's June! [Gosh I haven't reviewed you in so long!] I think this is great. Not just plain great, but like, supertastically great. It's slightly... morbid :? ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Busy Is Your Low

    Hey there mystymizer! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you :). This was clearly expressed; I love how you voiced how you feel about the town. Well ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Moksha, Pt. 1

    Hey there Zalarus! I'm not sure if I've reviewed you before; but I'm June. I found this piece, and I wasn't expecting much from it as I opened it. But! ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Not Enough

    Hi there Yatta! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you ;). Okay! So! This was decent. I think that this holds a definite potential to be able ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lesson from the Storm

    Hey there! I'm June and I'm going to review this for you :). Lightening thunders across the sky. I feel the rain and sigh. A cool breeze hits my face ...

    Feb 9, 2009


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World