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Re: Salted Rain
Hi Happy-dear! June here! I haven't reviewed anything by you in ages! Anywhoo, here we go: • Okay! In your first stanza, the only thing that needs changing/fixing is your ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: A Hundred Suns: Etherite
Hey Stori/FOD! June here! Okay! I really, really like A Hundred Suns: Sepia, so, I figured I would probably enjoy the other parts. I enjoyed most of them, but this? ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: .....Forget me not
Hey there Sincerely, June here, and I am going to review this for you! I'll try not to be too harsh on you dear, here we go :D. I can't ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Wolves (Love in the Sky)
Hey there Zalarus! June here! There's not much to say about this piece other than how good it was. I really enjoyed it from start to finish. Compared to the ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Pathless
Hey there Meow! Welcome to YWS *late*! I'm June and I am going to review this for you. Before I begin, I want to mention that it's better to post ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Where is my radiant sun?
Hi there Velvet Night! Nice to meet you-- welcome to YWS! I'm June, your critic for the moment, and I am going to run over this for you :D. Also! ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: You vs. Me
Hey there Quiet Loud! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you (By the way, cool oxymoron of a username you have there :P) Let's get to business ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: My day
Hi there drama queen! I'm June! [I'm pretty sure we've met before, right? :)] Eek! I understand you're semi-new-ish, but our 2:1 policy must not be forgotten, dear. :) Please ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: deleted poem
Hey there Zakku Alpha! I'm June and I am going to review this for you :). (And, by the way, welcome to YWS! Hooray for new members!) So! Your concept ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: Violence
Hey Brina! I'm June :) This is a good foundation for an essay. It's serious and straight to the point. There are a few things in this that need some ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Quenched
Hi there Hannah! It's June! [Gosh I haven't reviewed you in so long!] I think this is great. Not just plain great, but like, supertastically great. It's slightly... morbid :? ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: My Busy Is Your Low
Hey there mystymizer! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you :). This was clearly expressed; I love how you voiced how you feel about the town. Well ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Moksha, Pt. 1
Hey there Zalarus! I'm not sure if I've reviewed you before; but I'm June. I found this piece, and I wasn't expecting much from it as I opened it. But! ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Not Enough
Hi there Yatta! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you ;). Okay! So! This was decent. I think that this holds a definite potential to be able ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Lesson from the Storm
Hey there! I'm June and I'm going to review this for you :). Lightening thunders across the sky. I feel the rain and sigh. A cool breeze hits my face ...
Feb 9, 2009
