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Re: And i behold the writer
Hey there Monument! June here again =) I really love your style! It's so peaceful, and so intricate-- it's just great. Let's start with nitpicks, dear, and then we'll move ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: Los Campesinos (English)
Hey Eraqio! It's June again! Wow, this poem is beautiful! You really managed to capture the tone, the setting-- everything about the American people who are seldom remembered. Well done. ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Healing
Hey Write wat I want! June here! I love short poems! I wish more people would write them, haha. Most often, the shorter, the sweeter, because it takes a lot ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: .
Hey there Rosey! You get my 350th review, and for this I get a purty, shiny blue star! Eek! :D She was still puzzling over it as she went to ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Idiotic boyfriend
Hey Darko! It's June again! Let's work on this ;). Before I begin... I'm confused. You say idiotic boyfriend, but you're referring to a she?? I think it should be ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Heartbeat
Hey Fire! It's June! Okay, I really don't have much to say about this-- I kind of fail at critiquing lyrics, but, I wanted to review this :). I think ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Clueless Cabby
Hey 100 x Stupid! June here! I don't remember if I've ever reviewed you before! It seems like I have, but I'm not sure. Anyway, let's start! So, this is ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Edward Cullen/Viagra Parody
Hey there Miss Cook! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, nice to meet you! YWS has a 2:1 policy rule, which means that before you post one thing of your work, ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Where are her mittens?
Hey there Vivacious! I'm June! Nice to meet you! Aww! This is cute! I love kittens, so this is totally one of my favorite types of poems, haha. So! I'm ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: L.O.V.E
Hey there Rook! Welcome to YWS! Before I begin, I just want to let you know that YWS has a 2:1 policy, which means that before you post one piece ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Nature of the Lies We Speak
Hey Myrcie! June here! Another wonderful, wonderful poem by you-- good job, this is really beautiful. To be brief, dear, I'm not so fond of the punctuation. I don't think ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: The 'Disused' Classroom - Chapter One - The Screaming
Hey there Thien (and Swottie!) Let's take a look at this! So, spelling and grammar were good as well as your other mechanics. However, we have a slight problem, dear. ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Calm
Hey there! I'm June, and I'm your critic for the moment! Here we go! Okay! I'm kind of short on time here, so I can't go too indepth on this, ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: A Spinster-To-Be
Demi! It's June! I believe I owe you reviews! *growls* You didn't tell me you posted anything new! Let's take a look at this: *looks* Hm, nothing major here, so ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Monk Roots
Hey Sol! It's June again! This is quite a beautiful poem. It's rather abstract, and it's weighty-- meaning that it's carrying a lot. There's not much to change, honestly. So, ...
Feb 22, 2009
