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Re: Seven Letters
Well, Hello there, Meep! June here! Have I ever reviewed you before? Seriously? I don't think I have. I think I would remember? Oh wait, I did. But it was ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Victorian Bushires, 2009
Hi there, Jess! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you ^_^. First things first, this is a wonderful poem. I love the rhyme scheme throughout this; it ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Pain
*flies in* Hi there, Niah! It's June! Good to see you postin' some works 'round here! But! I just want to remind you of a rule we have here on ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Music, A Personal Study
Aloha! June here. This was truly impressive, from start to finish. The language, the clear, earnest, simplicity of it came off in such a fluent way, and had such a ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: .
Hi Rosey! June here! Warning: I am going to be extremely structure-minded and extremely nitpicky and extremely harsh in this review ;) Or... sort of. Anyway! Let's get working. First! ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Storm
Hiya Tiff! June here! Okay. I'm totally and utterly horrible at remembering to review things; you can torture me for the delay on this as long as you want, dear. ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Hi! June here! So. I'm sorry for the uber long delay; I have plenty of excuses lined up if I need one, but, anyway, I'm finally getting around to reviewing ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: I Just Saw a Face
Hiya Ross! June here! I take ages, don't I? :P I promised you I'd review this, and I haven't gotten around to it 'til now. Anyway! Let's have a look ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Child
Aloha, Sploosh! June here :). So sorry for the delay on this; I kept forgetting to review this, yet, I knew I was supposed to review some thing or another ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Changes
Hi Evie! Welcome to Young Writers Society! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you now. Before I begin, I'd like to let you know that YWS ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Untitled(for now)
Hey there, Layla! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you! Let's put corrections first, and other stuff later: “Coming”, her Mom groaned back. • ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Pawnshop Delights.
Hi Eraqio! This was rather interesting to read. I like your usage of onomatopoeia throughout this, dear. The repetition of some of the words created a nice, rhythmic effect, as ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: what do you mean?
Hello there, Playboy! I'm June, and I'm going to be your instructor/reviewer/critic for the moment. Let's begin, but before I do, I want you to know that I am not ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: No Match
Hi Peanut! June here! :D Wow! You know, I recommend you do NaPoWriMo this year; if you don't know what it is, it's National Poetry Writing Month; where you write ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Ellipsis
Hi there, Kisba! June here, and I'm going to review this for you. I'm not sure if I have ever reviewed you before, but either way, I'll try to not ...
Mar 28, 2009
