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Juniper

  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Seven Letters

    Well, Hello there, Meep! June here! Have I ever reviewed you before? Seriously? I don't think I have. I think I would remember? Oh wait, I did. But it was ...

    Apr 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Victorian Bushires, 2009

    Hi there, Jess! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you ^_^. First things first, this is a wonderful poem. I love the rhyme scheme throughout this; it ...

    Apr 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pain

    *flies in* Hi there, Niah! It's June! Good to see you postin' some works 'round here! But! I just want to remind you of a rule we have here on ...

    Apr 15, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: Music, A Personal Study

    Aloha! June here. This was truly impressive, from start to finish. The language, the clear, earnest, simplicity of it came off in such a fluent way, and had such a ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: .

    Hi Rosey! June here! Warning: I am going to be extremely structure-minded and extremely nitpicky and extremely harsh in this review ;) Or... sort of. Anyway! Let's get working. First! ...

    Apr 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Storm

    Hiya Tiff! June here! Okay. I'm totally and utterly horrible at remembering to review things; you can torture me for the delay on this as long as you want, dear. ...

    Apr 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Untitled

    Hi! June here! So. I'm sorry for the uber long delay; I have plenty of excuses lined up if I need one, but, anyway, I'm finally getting around to reviewing ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I Just Saw a Face

    Hiya Ross! June here! I take ages, don't I? :P I promised you I'd review this, and I haven't gotten around to it 'til now. Anyway! Let's have a look ...

    Apr 5, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Child

    Aloha, Sploosh! June here :). So sorry for the delay on this; I kept forgetting to review this, yet, I knew I was supposed to review some thing or another ...

    Mar 30, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Changes

    Hi Evie! Welcome to Young Writers Society! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you now. Before I begin, I'd like to let you know that YWS ...

    Mar 30, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Untitled(for now)

    Hey there, Layla! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you! Let's put corrections first, and other stuff later: “Coming”, her Mom groaned back. • ...

    Mar 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Pawnshop Delights.

    Hi Eraqio! This was rather interesting to read. I like your usage of onomatopoeia throughout this, dear. The repetition of some of the words created a nice, rhythmic effect, as ...

    Mar 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: what do you mean?

    Hello there, Playboy! I'm June, and I'm going to be your instructor/reviewer/critic for the moment. Let's begin, but before I do, I want you to know that I am not ...

    Mar 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: No Match

    Hi Peanut! June here! :D Wow! You know, I recommend you do NaPoWriMo this year; if you don't know what it is, it's National Poetry Writing Month; where you write ...

    Mar 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Ellipsis

    Hi there, Kisba! June here, and I'm going to review this for you. I'm not sure if I have ever reviewed you before, but either way, I'll try to not ...

    Mar 28, 2009


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