Juniper

Hey there! June here! So... I think that this is supposed to be a lesson sort of story, but we're not actually getting the full feel of it. Right now, ...

Hey there Ofir! June here! Aww, no replies on your previous post? :( In the future, if you want a review, feel free to PM me. I'm usually up to ...

Rosey! June here! Mwaha, something fun to review! *lays scissors, harshness, and red pen on the table. The red pen shows in black, though* She knew why leaving was the ...

Hi Poppity! June here! My first thoughts on this was "Huh? The character jumped off a building?" So, while I think that it's good, in all of it's vagueness and ...

Such a selfish bunny, tsk tsk. (Teague needs to stop thinking so deeply on such matters :P) Snoinkie, this story is hilarious. I started laughing when I first read it ...

Hi there! I'm June! Welcome to YWS! So, this poem was decent. I think that because the subject of a love poem is so commonly used, so commonly written about, ...

Hi Angel Wing, I'm June, welcome to YWS! This is a really cute poem. The rhyming was very well done, and the rhythm was even, swift and brilliant. I love ...

Mars! (Thanks for rating this xD) This was excellent! I read this story once... I don't remember the name of the girl in the story, but I think it was ...

Hi there Fragile! You've done an excellent job capturing the excitement and pace of a motorcycle race. At first, I wasn't sure if the narrator was a girl or a ...

Hi hi! June here! I really like your writing-- I just don't read it enough. :) Here's an attempt to review/critique this. So, for starters, I think you have a ...

Emma! June here! Wow, this was superb! As I was reading it, I was not expecting the end to be anything like this at all. It's a great ending-- you're ...

Hey RGallagher! June here! Wow, this piece definitely hooked me from the beginning... You have a wonderful way with words. Some things I want to point out: Jeremy said nothing. ...

Hi Kyllorac! Juniper here! Synonyms for golden? Hmm... I would suggest dandelion, but that seems too flowery and not suited to this story. I hate sending people to thesaurus's when ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS! I'm June, it's great to see you here. Before I begin, I just want to let you know that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy ...

Aunty-Poppity! June here! So, I think this is definitely a brilliant piece. Creative and short. Little things first! I am blind to your flaws – at least, I would, had ...