Juniper

Hello, Kylan! So, I'm not sure how much of a "full" review I'll be able to get done on this before my mother declares it bedtime. Let's have a stab: ...

Sir, your portfolio is cluttered. It's hard to find stuff in it. :P I realize I'm super late on this, but I'll try to do my best to mention what ...

Hello, Ab! I'm June, welcome to YWS! Ah, Haiku. I love them, and not enough people write them. It's so wonderful when people actually take the time to write them, ...

Hello, Kylan! This is beautiful. Definitely a favorite of mine by you. It is strange. I no longer think about the food. Food is a painful and distant memory. It ...

Hi Galeri! My apologies on getting to this so late. I had a review started and saved, and somehow it eludes me on this computer, so: As I read through ...

Hi, Pepper! June here! My apologies on getting to this so late (let's just say fashionably late :P) and my apologies in advance if I sound harsh. Closer, closer, closer. ...

Hi, Stripes! June here! I thought this was cute! But, then again, everything that involves sisters is cute to me, as long as it's not about my sisters. *mean* Anyway! ...

Hi, Lauren! Let me begin by saying that this is sad. If it's a true story, I'd like to say that it's wonderful that you're able to write about this ...

Hello, Ellie! June here! So, let's get down to business! >> First impressions • Force. As I read this the first time, I felt that there was a very, very ...

Hi, Zaneman! Welcome to YWS! Like most poetry, Zane, there were things I liked about this and things I didn't. I did like how you expressed a tone through short ...

Hi, Holly! You might want to check Writing Gooder today... Anyway! So, I read this poem once, and it didn't stick out to me as outstandingly unique or anything, but, ...

Hi, Sparky! Welcome to YWS! I'm June. Before I begin, I'd just like to throw out there that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, dear, which means that for every ...

Hi, Young Gun! June here, welcome to YWS! There are a few things in this poem that detract from the overall message/point of this, dear. Let's have a look: In ...

Hi, Sara! June here! I'm not going to pick line by line at this, Sara, but I'll point out a few things I liked and did not like. To start, ...

(:P) Hi, The Brother's Rice! Welcome to YWS! I have to mention that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy which states that before you post one piece of your work, ...