Juniper

Hey there, Man! I'm sorry for not getting around to this sooner; I'm easily distracted. ^^ Content wise, I have to say that I enjoyed this. You raised some pretty ...

Kylan, Your exposition of setting in this piece is excellently done. Your vivid description of it does not fail here, and I think you've come very close to catching the ...

Haaawkie, This is cute. It actually reminds me of a poem I wrote a few months ago. I don't think your closing line does justice to the poem. It's one ...

Kammieyaz, Great personification of wintry spirit. I love how your focus was on the smaller things without diverting out attention from your target topic. I do not like how you ...

Hi Fruits Basket! Here I [finally] am! I must confess that I'm not too much of a fanfic or anime fan, and have never read this anime, so my knowledge ...

Hey there, Spiral. I'm June, your critic for the moment. I don't think you have quite delivered as much interest for your audience as you could have. Though the primary ...

Hey Forest, I'm going to be blatantly honest in this review. Hope I'm not too harsh. :) I don't like this. It feels like you were trying to give your ...

Hey Forest, About a year and a half ago, someone told me that in writing poetry you have to distinguish your narrative story voice from your poetic voice. If you're ...

Ell! I liked this! I do heavily agree with Snoinkarina that 'they' is a weak word in poetry. Kill the usage of it, and 'that' as much as you can ...

Hey there, Holianthus! My deepest apologies for not reviewing this sooner. I quite enjoyed this, Holly. I would reword the beginning-- it sounds like the words are uncertain and the ...

Hey there, Kylan, Things brings to mind modern Japanese poetry -- or reformed haiku as some would put it. On an examined read, it does show a bit, haha, that ...

Hello Galeri! Finally here as I promised. Seeing as so much has been covered, I'll try to keep this short. I'm not a fan of the title. I don't have ...

Hey there, God. Been a long time since I've read your work, let alone critiqued it. Good to know you still have your flair. I don't really do nitpicks, but ...

Hey there, Galeri! I hate to begin on such a praise-filled note but, I have to say, I truly adore your poetry. It's so fluid, and wonderful in so many ...

Hey Rosemary! June here. Your poetry has seen a steady improvement since the beginning of this year. I'm glad to see that. I think this poem is good. It has ...