Juniper

Hi, Racket! June here, I really like the way your poem starts off. You create an intriguing metaphor for the wind and heighten your reader's interest in your poem, which ...

Hey, 8! June here, The lovely prior reviewer alerted me to this work of yours, so here I am! Let's have a look, shall we? To begin, I don't like ...

Hi, Alliyah. The overall impression that I gathered from this poem was that it feels daunting, almost as if something intimidating is about to happen. As I read through the ...

Hi Kandi, I'm Juniper, While I feel like there were places in this poem where the lines read like sentences from a narrative prose piece rather than something poetic, I ...

Hi Lyssie kins! I'm June, I don't know what to make of this poem. Clearly your goal was to tell a message while maintaining a rhyme, which you've successfully done ...

Hey Claire, June here, This reads to me as more of a prose-like letter than a poem. I don't say this because of the chunk of writing as opposed to ...

Hey rbt! I'm June. Can I call you Ribbit? I don't want to spend time picking this poem apart line-by-line, so I'll just give you the rundown of things that ...

Hey Jash! It's been a while since I've seen anything from you, so I'm really glad to see something from you. I like the creative style of the poem, but ...

Hey, Scarlette, June here, I'm torn on this one; stylistically I like this poem, and I don't. I like it because it adds character to your words, but I don't ...

Hey there, January blues! I'm June, I think you have a good idea here, and I like the way your poem started off-- hopeful and full of purpose. Looking at ...

Hey there, Deanie! I'm June, You know how sometimes someone says something to you and you raise an eyebrow at them and wonder why they didn't just say it the ...

Bonjour, Hola, Guten tag! I'm June, You titled this poem forbidden love, so I was on the edge of my seat, waiting for a juicy tale about two lovers whose ...

Hey there, I'm June, I like the voice of this poem a lot-- it's kind of adventurous and holds the readers interest as it moves along. Not to long ago ...

Hey Skorlir, Juniparre here, Have you ever gone parachuting? There's a moment when you're really close to the ground where the descent stops making cartwheels turn in your stomach and ...

Hey, Kammie, Juniper here, Love poems have been done over and over, perhaps a million times over, if not ten times more. I was a little bored with this one ...