Juniper

Charm, The problem that I am having here is pretty much the same as Firestarter expressed: this is all overused. I think it's possible to get away with an overused ...

Hey, I don't know what to do with this, haha. You had something going there at the beginning that you kind of lost and kind of got back in the ...

Aushy! It's wonderful to see you writing poetry, Generally, when people approach poetry for the first time, I find that they take to rhyming poems to experiment with. I'm not ...

Thane... haha, I don't even know you, but if these are the thoughts you have on average, I am very concerned for you. This is one of the most morbid ...

Hey, Lily, Here again, I feel that you could do a lot better without the rhyme scheme that you're using. I don't feel that rhyme is everything in a poem, ...

Hey, Fiction! To me, this poem is in suit with it's title. There's little conveyance of emotion, or any feeling for that matter, and because of that, I'm indifferent to ...

Lily, I understand that you're writing about something personal to you, and by no means is what I say about the poem directed to you or to your hurt. I ...

Hey, Those big words in the middle of the poem are very distracting! Provided that the rest of the poem doesn't take on any intricate structure performances with size or ...

Hey there, I'm going to assume that this is part of a story, but I'm not sure where to find the rest of it. I think that this is a ...

Persephonia, The problem that I'm having with each of these is that there's a lack of connectivity between your images, your words, and the emotion that you're trying to work ...

Hi, Kaywiia, June here, I opened my eyes, my back stiff from the cot's springs. I groan, and look in the mirror. I didn't even loook like myself. Maintain an ...

Hi, Eritela, I'm June, let's have a look, shall we? I don't think there's anything bad about this poem, rather there are little things to this that disagree with one ...

Rosey! I've read this before you corrected it, but I never got around to reviewing it; brace yourself. It doesn't seem like this is only my 1300th review, you know; ...

Blackbird, Very well done, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this poem. I love the way you crafted every line as an image that works so well with ...

Hey, Persephoneia Tanka is indeed one of the more addictive forms of poetry, especially given that they're generally short enough to practice a lot. Here, I think you did okay; ...