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I liked this poem. It was interesting. I enjoyed the final stanza, but if maybe you could elaborate on the pain. I enjoyed the use of the tangles, I had ...

I love this poem! It was captivating, and amazing! the rhyming is beautiful it reminds me of the Cremating of Sam Mgee (I think that's is how you spell the ...

Okay, the title drew me in perfectly, which I always love it when a writer does that. But, I must admit, your first line, both confused me, and slightly bored ...

This has the potential to be an amazing intro, but it needs a little work. The title you have is perfect! Titles are more important than the entire book, if ...

I, as a novelist am normally very picky on short stories. There are many things I want to nit-pick on other's short stories, so when I read this one my ...

Hahahahah! I loved this poem, it was amusing and fun to read! But, the only thing that is missing is the sweet tea ;). Anyways, one little tweak, in writing ...

I love love love this poem!!! I loved the way it rhymed. I like poems that rhyme, it gives a whole new flow to the poem. This poem gave a ...

Brilliant work! I could not stop reading! the diction was good and your sentence structure was even better! I like how you were able to establish the characters personality almost ...

This poem put tears in my eyes. It was sad but in a beautiful way. The description was really good, and I enjoyed reading it to the very end. Just ...

I liked this poem, it was cute. But, it didn't get really passionate until the last stanza. I can see the hints of romance intertwined in this piece, but in ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It keep me reading, and wanting more at the end. However, there was one stanza that seemed a little awkward Anything else would be boring, ...

I really enjoyed the flow of this piece, I liked how the ryming add even more flow (I'm awestruck because my ryming is terrible). Also, this was a very powerful ...

Hello! I will be reviewing your story this evening. I really enjoyed this poem, it was really deep. Just one little nit- pick. The air you were looking for is ...

Okay, I loved this poem, but it was way too short. You need some more detail in here, I liked the analogy with the shoes. But, describe the girl. What ...

I love how this poem flows. It made me read it like a bedtime story book (if that makes any sense), but I love how it rhymes. The poem seemed ...