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Re: The Lonely Roman
*Drops from ceiling, lands on ground.* Ouch! Uh... Hey! 'Lias Roman around to deliver a review! The spring rain weighed heavily against my battered shoulders as I trudged through the ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: School Bully - Chapt. One
Good day, just Julias, Roman around to deliver an interview! First, I would like to start with this! “Well go ahead,” he barked “Say it!” The small boy looked at ...
Aug 25, 2016 -
Re: Poor, poor Theren
Hey there! Lias, just Roman around to drop off an interview! It was amazing, how descriptive you were, but at the same time it wasn't too much for me to ...
Aug 23, 2016 -
Re: Luminous (Old Version)
Good day, Lius here, Roman around to give you a review! First of all, this opening line. *Shivers* The Forge wasn’t just a shop. It was a prison. So simple, ...
Aug 23, 2016 -
Re: Sealskins
*Drops from ceiling and lands on ground* Ow... that hurt more than usual. Good day, Anarchy! I'm here to deliver a well-deserved review! First of all, how dare thee telleth ...
Aug 19, 2016 -
Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 2
Good day, Cups here to FINALLY serve a delicious interview! "Ayda thought it was a human girl. It certainly wasn’t any species she had ever seen before. It could have ...
Aug 19, 2016 -
Re: Silence Is Good
Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! First of all, I kind of like the way that you described silence. And, I quote: ~ We invest so much ...
Aug 16, 2016 -
Re: Final Page...
Good day, Cups here to stop, and drop an interview! That opening was a crazy good sentence, but it was a pretty confusing way to start a chapter. I'm gathering ...
Aug 8, 2016 -
Re: Mirror's World Chapter One
Good day, Cups here to stop and drop a review! First of all, I saw the sixteen and up warning for this chapter. I cringed a bit, (not a huge ...
Aug 8, 2016 -
Re: El
*Drops from ceiling* Good day, Cups here to... you know what, you get the gist. First of all, your very first sentence tells us that El has powers, which is ...
Aug 4, 2016 -
Re: the Disappearing Girl has gone missing
*Drops from ceiling* Heyo! Me again! First of all, I LOVE the way you introduced the characters in a short but detailed way. You introduced a bit of all their ...
Aug 3, 2016 -
Re: Burned 8.1
*Drops from ceiling* Heyo! Cups here to serve a delicious interview! So, just a fair warning, I hadn't read any of the other chapters of this story, so if I ...
Aug 3, 2016 -
Re: The Pilgrim- Chapter Five
Hey, Cups here to... you know what? I think you get the gist. Morning light crawled over the mountains, setting the snowdrifts alight. A breeze shook the tips of the ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: The Pilgrim- Chapter Two
Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! I really like how you started this chapter. You caught our attention with the action. Enough of this preamble. Let's get ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: The Pilgrim- Chapter One
Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious interview! Where men chased bounties across the frozen wastes, seeking shaded ruins and the scourges of the mountains. Where a pilgrim edged ...
Aug 1, 2016
