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JourneyGirl

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The World of Keinan, Introduction

    Gee, don't I know you from somewhere, and the story? HAHA! Good job partner. What a great introduction to the story. We really need to start talking ideas for some ...

    Mar 9, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: Cross Your Heart and Hope to Die

    Oh my gosh... this was a really good story! It was shocking and I love the twist! I only saw two mistakes: 1.) There is a palpable treat in the ...

    Sep 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Survive the Night - Chapter 2

    No, no, I liked it it was good! Once again I failed to detect errors. Great job! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Let me know when you ...

    Sep 5, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Survive the Night - Chapter 1

    Okay, I loved this! As you know I am a huge Hunger Games fan and I am always looking for fanfictions. Time for my review! I actually don't think there ...

    Sep 3, 2012
  • Script » Humor, Theatre Re: The Interwebs

    I found this a bit humorous! I love the ending, "Well that's that then" love it! I think this would be great if it was longer as well, adding a ...

    Sep 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Literature Re: FREAK - Chapter 1

    This is quite interesting. It grabbed my attention immediately! I liked it! I can't wait to read more! I would just like to know more about the freaks and the ...

    Sep 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Teen Fiction Re: Your Disguise, My Demise

    This was a good poem/song, it was just a little confusing to me, I had to read it twice to understand, but I bet that this is definately what someone ...

    Aug 22, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: "Pandora's Box"

    Another one of your great poems! This is one of the must true poems I have read in a while though. Hope is scarce at times, but it is always ...

    Aug 22, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: "Concrete Jungle"

    Great poem! It really elaborates on how natural forests are similar to the busy cities that take over so many of them. I love how it tells how a city ...

    Aug 22, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Tear Stains

    I loved it! But what happened with the killer after he covered her eyes, did he just bring her back to the room? The ending was definately a surprise to ...

    Aug 22, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Heart of a Career Part 2 (Unfinished)

    Once again, I love it! I love how you made Glimmer confused by the chanting of "Katniss!" If this isn't all of chapter six, then I am so excited to ...

    Aug 6, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Heart of a Career Chapter 3

    Oh what a twist with the mentor! I absolutely loved this chapter as well! I really am loving this fanfiction! I can't wait to continue! Spell check: "/my anger grew ...

    Aug 6, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Heart of a Career Chapter 2

    Excellent, just like the first chapter! I absolutely love Glimmer's mother, she is exactly how I imagined a District 1 mother. Spell check: " I was elevated about four inched ...

    Aug 6, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Heart of a Career Chapter 1

    Okay, first off I would like to say that I absolutely loved this piece! I am a huge Hunger Games fan and this is a great interperetation of Glimmer and ...

    Aug 6, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Amaranth

    I absolutely loved this first chapter! I don't think I saw any errors. I love the way it was written, and also how you didn't dwindle on introducing everyone in ...

    Aug 5, 2012


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